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The emperor and his daughters

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The Emperor and his daughters


There was once an old emperor who lived in an enormous golden palace in the middle of the city Ping Chong.
He had three beautiful daughters, but unfortunately no sons.

“I would like you to get married before I die”, said the emperor to his daughters.
And he began to search three princes for his daughters and one day he found this.

But his daughters did not like the princes and her father got very angry and mad.
“Whatever you do, you must be marry before you are sixteen years old”
said the emperor to his daughters.

They felt in love with the three farmer sons and before they got sixteen years old they married.[/i]

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andy55 hat geschrieben:Please can you help me?
I wrote a story about "The Emperor and his Daughters".
Can you read it, and help me.
That would be nice of you. Thank you in advance.

The Emperor and his Daughters


Once upon a time there was (typischer Anfang für ein Märchen) an old emperor who lived in an enormous golden palace in the middle of the city Ping Chong.
He had three beautiful daughters, but unfortunately no sons.

“I would like you to get married before I die”, said the emperor to his daughters.
And he began to search for three princes for his daughters and one day he found them.

But his daughters did not like the princes and their father got very angry about this.
“Whatever you do, you must get married before you are sixteen years old”, said the emperor to his daughters.

So they fell in love with the three farmer sons and before they got sixteen years old they married them.
Well done!

Grüße
Duckduck

andy55

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Thank you very much :wink: