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[Mira1991]

Hallo,
wir haben einen Text mit einem Teil von Kennedys Rede 1961 bekommen und sollen das nun zusammenfassen.
Hoffe,es gibt jemanden,der mir das hier korrigieren kann.
Mein englisch ist leider echt schlecht...

Danke im voraus!!

Liebe Grüße!


J.F. Kennedy's Inauguration Speech(1961)

Notes:
the people should come together(North and South, East and West)
since the founding of the country,each generation of American's has been summoned to give evidence to its national loyalty
now: they come together again
against the common enemies: tyranny,poverty,disease, war
in the past only a few generation have been given the role of the freedom in the maximum danger like now
the energy,faith, the effort will light our country
and it will truly light the hole world
the American's must asked what they can do together for the world


Text:
In the Inauguration Speech J.F. Kennedy talk in the year 1961 to the American people about the American thinking. Since America was founded each American generation has summoned to give evidence to its national loyalty. And now, it comes for their generation at this moment. All American should fight against the common enemies: tyranny,poverty,disease and war. This is the dream of the American. All people must come together and struggle for their own freedom. But the people must do it together: the North and the South and the East and the West. They can light their country al over the world with energy,faith and the effort to live the American Dream.
All in all the people not need to asked what the country can do for you, they must asked what they can do together for the country and make it with God's protection.

[Delfino]

The full inaugural address made by John F. Kennedy
after being sworn in as the thirty-fifth President
of the United States on January 20, 1961. (duration:14 minutes)

Text
http://avalon.law.yale.edu/20th_century/kennedy.asp

Sound
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/c ... ddress.ogg

Video
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/c ... Speech.ogv

Hallo,
wir haben einen Text mit einem Teil von Kennedys Rede zu seinem Amtsantritt in 1961 bekommen
und diesen sollen wir nun zusammenfassen.
Ich hoffe, es gibt hier jemanden, der mir meinen Text korrigieren kann.
Mein Englisch ist leider echt schlecht...

Danke im Voraus!!

Liebe Grüße!


Inaugural address of John F. Kennedy (1961)

Text:
In his inaugural address in 1961 J.F. Kennedy talked to the American people about the American ...