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[saturn]

Hallo, ich hab zwar eben einen Text geschrieben, ich habe aber noch einen,der hat nicht mehr hingepasst.

In my opinion the computer is a good thing. I use my Laptop almost every day and then a few hours. Today it's scarcely possible to live without a computer because the computer would use everywhere today, like in offices, schools, by doctors or in banks. If you have a speeling mistake in a document you can corect this easy. this you cannot do so easy by handwritten or by typewriter documents. So the computer is very good, fast and profitable. You can store a lot of documents into the computer and later you cann see all.the computer would use more to chat with other people or to play games. Mostly would use the internet. Mostly I use the internet often. Here i can chat with other people from other countries. Through the internet I have founded a lot of nice friends. I can write with my friends from Colombia ,USA and Finland. You can find a lot of new friends by MySpace or Facebook. There I have founded new friends, too. There you can get in contact with your favourite singers or bands because a lot of stars are bx MySpace, Facebook or by Twitter. So I had to know a lotof people rom Finland or I search more people from there. Often I search news from Finland and Colombia, you can't get so much informations in the newspapers or in the TV, so I get my informations from the internet.besides you can get answers by Wikipedia about history or your favourite singers or other unknown things. You can find about almost all answers. Besides you can find persons, who are missing. The internet is good because you can find history from other countries. But on the other side there are so many dangers. There are people, who crack the passwords or young people, who have party pictures by Facebook and would threaten or the chiefs see this pictures and they don't take this applicants. I find computers very good.


Danke für die Korrektur im Voraus. Das ist mir eine große Hilfe

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo, ich hab zwar eben einen Text geschrieben, ich habe aber noch einen, der hat nicht mehr hingepasst.

In my opinion computers are a good thing. I use my laptop almost every day, sometimes for hours. Today it's scarcely possible to live without a computer because it is used everywhere: in offices, schools, at the doctors' or in banks. If you have a speeling mistake in a document you can corect this easy. (Ach, saturnlein, da möchte man Dir doch zurufen, warum tust Du es nicht?! Der Satz muss heißen:) If you have a spelling mistake in a document you can easily correct it. You cannot do this so easily in a handwritten or typed document. So the computer is very fast and profitable. You can store a lot of documents into the computer and later you cann work with them again. Many people use the computer to chat with other people or to play games. Or they use the internet, which I do very often. Here I can chat with other people from other countries. Through the internet I have founded a lot of nice friends. I can write with my friends from Colombia, the USA and Finland. You can find a lot of new friends on MySpace or Facebook. There I have founded new friends, too. You can also contact your favourite singers or bands because a lot of stars are on MySpace, Facebook or by Twitter. I got to know a lot of people from Finland and I am still looking for more. I often search news about Finland and Colombia, you can't get so much informations in the newspapers or on the TV, so I get it from the internet. Besides, you can get answers for questions in history or about your favourite singers or other unknown things at Wikipedia. The internet is good because you can find out about the history of other countries. So, on the one hand, you can find an answer to almost every question on the internet. On top of that, you can find missing persons. But on the other hand there are many dangers. There are people, who crack the passwords, for example. And some threaten to show party pictures of young people on Facebook to their bosses and cause trouble.
All the same, I think computers are very good.


Danke für die Korrektur im Voraus. Das ist mir eine große Hilfe

Gern geschehen. Schau Dir die Fehler bitte genau an und ein besonderer Tipp: Lerne das Passiv. Es wird gebildet aus einer Form von "be" und der 3. Stammform. Ein "would" hat da gar nichts zu suchen.

Grüße
Duckduck