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Bitte um Text Korrektur

Beitrag von saturn »

Hallo, hoffentlich kann jemand meine Fehler korrigieren. Bin mir nicht sicher,ob s richtig ist. Ich soll einem Journalisten sagen was ich gesehen habe und einen Zeitungartikel schreiben.

I had see this crime. Unfortunately I couldn't see all so exactly. An old woman wanted to go from her house on the corner and suddenly came running a young man and snatched the handbag from the old woman. The man weard a blue jeans and a black leather jacket and he had dark brown hair. The woman was shocked and screamed, that the man had steal her handb. Then I had see, that an another man running after the culprit. I couldn't see more but apparent he coulded get the thief because he ame back with the handbag. It doesn't steal something out of the handbag. All the papers, identity paper, the money and the credit card were still in the bag. Unfortunately the thief coulded run away. Other passers- by called the police and an ambulance. A few minutes later came the police and the ambulance. They asked the woman what happend and she said all.Out of a slight shock the woman is in order. The thief is conspicuous me earlier because he looked around. Although the police coulded hunt the thief but he coulded run away. As witness I must with on the police station. There I had hear that the man still steal often. He would search for a long time but healways coulded run away.

Handbag thief on the flight
In Berlin -Adlershof woulded attack an old woman on the street yesterday afternoon. A young man snatched her the handbag and run away. A passer-by coulded hunt the thief and coulded snatched him the bag away. Nevertheless the thief coulded run away. Other passers-by called the police. At first they coulded hunt him but later he coulded get away. The police request about aid in this fall. The thief weard a blue jeans and a black leather jacket at this time. Besides he has dark brown hair. He is approximate 1,75m hihg and about 25 years old. Who had see this crime or know the man should go to the police.

Vielen Dank für die Mühe.

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: Bitte um Text Korrektur

Beitrag von Duckduck (Contributor) »

Hi Saturn,

dieser Text ist identisch mit einem in einem anderen Forum. Zwar hast Du dort einen anderen nickname, aber soviel Zufall und Übereinstimmung der Fehler ist ja gar nicht möglich. ODER ihr habt beide dieselbe grottenschlechte Übersetzungsmaschine benutzt. Aber auch dann muss ich Dir sagen, dass ich ein wenig mehr als das erwarte, bevor ich meine Zeit für die Korrektur opfere.
Cross Postings sind nicht gestattet.

Grüße
Duckduck

saturn

Re: Bitte um Text Korrektur

Beitrag von saturn »

Entschuldige. Ich hatten in ein anderes Forum geschrieben,heute früh, weil ich gedacht, dass mir keiner helfen kann. Sorry.