Was ist alles daran falsch ?

[hamburg243]

Hallo,

hätte gerne das hier korrigiert gehabt . Wäre sehr nett und hoffe ihr seid nicht ganz so sauer wegen meinem Englisch:

The result of this survey show some differences between young English and German people.
The future from the young English people is the same.
The English children’s get more pocket money a month than a German children.
In Hamburg the people get around 12 euros a month and English young people 14 pounds in London. It is very difficult to name the average for pocket-money because they are countries with different incomes.
They have the same culture and the way of life and humor.
The behavior is different. But all in all people in the world are the same.

[Delfino]

Hallo,
ich hätte gerne eine Korrektur von meinem hier folgenden Text.
Es wäre sehr nett und ich hoffe ihr seid mir nicht ganz so sauer wegen meinem Englisch:

The results of this survey show some differences between young English and German people.
The future prospects of the young English people are similar (compared to the German ones).
The English children get more pocket money per month than the German children.
In London they get 14 pounds and in Hamburg the young people get around 12 euros a month.
It is very difficult to determine the average pocket-money because these are countries with different incomes and costs for living.
Although their behaviour is different they have a similar culture, way of life and humour.
As far as I am concerned, people from all around the world are basically the same.

Bitte achte auch auf deine deutsche Rechtschreinung. Siehe Forumsregeln...
Außerdem möchten einige englische Muttersprachler hier ihr Deutsch verbessern.

[Delfino]

... and living expenses / costs of living.