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Cornel

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Hallo Leute :D

es wäre sehr nett, von euch, wenn jemand von euch mal einen Blick auf meinen Aufsatz, zum Thema "Erstkommunion" werfen könnte :)
Vielen, vielen Dank schon im Voraus für die Hilfe :)

The first communion

In many countrys of europe is the day of the first communion very important for the children. On this day in may, children who are from the same neighbourhood and visit the same school, go together with their family, the relatives, the teachers and their class mates to the next church, where the ceremony is held.

The day starts always very early, because the parents have to dress-up their children and themselve. The boys wear traditionally a white shirt, a trouser and a jacket. Girls wear always a dress.

When they are ready, the children go with their family and relatives to the school. Where they meet their class mates and teachers. Then they leave the school and walk together to the church. To celebrate this ceremonial occasion and to receive their first communion.

Vielen dank noch mal!

Wünsche euch übrigens noch einen schönen Nachmittag :wink:

Delfino

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Cornel hat geschrieben:Hallo Leute :D

Es wäre sehr nett von euch, wenn jemand einmal einen Blick auf meinen Aufsatz zum Thema "Erstkommunion" werfen könnte :)
Vielen, vielen Dank schon im Voraus für die Hilfe :)


The first communion

The day of the first communion is very important for the children in many European countries.
On this special day in May the children, (some friends,) their families and many relatives attend together the ceremony at the local church. [*]

The day starts very early for everyone. The parents help their children to dress-up and get ready themselves.
Traditionally, the boys wear a white shirt, dark trousers and a jacket. All Girls wear a dress.

When they are ready, the children go with their families and relatives to school where they meet their class mates and teachers.
Then everyone leaves the school and they walk together to the church where the children receive their first communion.
After the ceremony the people leave the church and continue to celebrate this unique occasion at home / at...

Vielen Dank nochmal!

Wünsche euch übrigens noch einen schönen Nachmittag :wink:
* Please remember to use short sentences when writing in English.
You go to school and you visit your relatives sometimes.

Duckduck (Contributor)

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Delfino hat geschrieben:
Cornel hat geschrieben:Hallo Leute :D

Es wäre sehr nett von euch, wenn jemand einmal einen Blick auf meinen Aufsatz zum Thema "Erstkommunion" werfen könnte :)
Vielen, vielen Dank schon im Voraus für die Hilfe :)


The First Communion

The day of the First Communion is very important for the Catholic children in many European countries.
On this special day in May the children, (some friends,) their families and many relatives attend together the ceremony at the local church. [*]

The day starts very early for everyone. The parents help their children to dress-up and get ready themselves.
Traditionally, the boys wear a white shirt, dark trousers and a jacket. All girls wear white dresses.

When they are ready, the children and their families and relatives go to school where they meet their class mates and teachers.
Then everyone leaves the school and they walk together to the church where the children receive their first communion.
After the ceremony the people leave the church and continue to celebrate this unique occasion at home / at...

Vielen Dank nochmal!

Wünsche euch übrigens noch einen schönen Nachmittag :wink:
* Please remember to use short sentences when writing in English.
You go to school and you visit your relatives sometimes.
Grüße von
Duckduck

Cornel

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Vielen Dank für die Verbesserung, Leute :D