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Bitte schnell verbessern - ist echt wichtig !

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I Talk about myself.

Hello
My name is Jennifer but everyone call me Jenny, because it's shorter.I'm 15 years old.
My favourite subjects in a school are maths,physics and sports.
Now I tell you something about my hobbies :
My greatest hobby is playing football, I used to play in a team since 3 years - I have training every wednesday and Friday. I get on well with my team and i have to be really fun to play.
and Another hobby of me is meeting my friends and going out or playing with the PC.
or watching TV and listening to music but i don't play any instrument or singing, because it's boring and i have no time for this. My favourite music devices are rnb, hip-hop or a little bit house.
After the secondary school, i go to the higher commercial, because i don't know what i want to do later. i hade made my internship by a dentist. The Internship was boring, because i had almost nothing to do. But my boss was very nice and explained everything to me.
I want to be later, because you get too little money.


Ich muss am Donnerstag ein Referat halten und meine Lehrerin meinte, ich sollte mich vor dem Referat mit ein paar sätzen vorstellen.

Delfino

Re: Bitte schnell verbessern - ist echt wichtig !

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__ZiehWeiter hat geschrieben:Thread title: A talk about myself.


Hello everyone!

Please let me introduce myself before I give my presentation about [topic].
My name is Jennifer [last name] but you can call me Jenny, like everyone does because it's shorter.
--- This might already be enough for a simple introduction at the beginning of your presentation about [topic]. Are you sure your teacher wants more? ---
I'm 15 years old and my favourite subjects in a school are maths, physics and sports.

Now I'll talk a bit about my hobbies.
My greatest hobby is playing soccer/football.
I started to play in my current team about 3 years ago.
We usually train on Wednesdays and Fridays.
I get on very well with my team mates and I really have a lot of fun playing soccer/football with them.
Another hobby of mine is ...
I also like meeting with my friends, going out for a party or playing with the PC.
I'm also listening to music or watching TV sometimes.
But I don't play any instrument or sing, because I think practising it is boring and I got no time for this anyway.
My favourite music genres are RnB, hip-hop or a little bit house.

After finishing the secondary school I'll probably go to a commercial college.
Because I haven't decided yet what I'm going to do later in life.
I carried out my internship at a dental practice.
This internship was rather boring, because I had almost nothing to do.
Fortunately my boss was very nice and explained everything to me.
He also mentioned that you earn only little money, because you need to invest in expensive technical equipment and you have to pay all your staff too.
Therefore, I don't think that I want to become a dentist later on.


Ich muss am Donnerstag ein Referat halten und meine Lehrerin meinte,
ich sollte mich vor dem Referat mit ein paar Sätzen vorstellen.