Bitte schnell nur sagen ob richtig so

[Kim-Ruben]

The Native Americans

The Native Americans are the first pupils of America. But then the Spanish came to America and they killed the Native Americans with their guns. But the Spanish came just at the sea so the Native Americans can live friendly in the middle of America. But that what just as soon as the train came. The Spanish came across of America and killed more and more Native Americans. Today the Native Americans just live in very small reservations, and that is not enough, there came many tourists into the reservations and look like the Native Americans live. As soon as the Spanish came, came also the clichés and they live since today. So some cliché is that the Native Americans are red, some other is that they dance around a campfire. That clichés are maybe true as the Spanish came first to America, but today everybody have to know that that clichés are not true. But also if the Native Americans look not to that little thing and go into the cities they look as everybody else, but they have a problem: if they want to get a job the job giver take earlier an other people as quick as they take a Native American, and that make the live of a Native American terrible. So you can see that the living as a Native American isn´t as easy as our living.

wir schreiben dienstag ne arbeit zu dem theme...und meine mum meinte soll ichmal korigieren lassen. Nicht vom inhalt her sondern eher ob man das so schreiben könte (jede grammatik) BITTe schnell antworten...danke

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Zu spaet. Stelle deinen Text bitte das naechste Mal frueher ein, schliesslich war Ostern und da sind viele nicht da. Dennoch viel Glueck bei deiner Arbeit!