für eine Praktikumsbewerbung brauche ich einen Letter of Motivation(LoM), bitte daher ein mal um eine Überprüfung meines ersten Entwurfs. Für ergänzende Ideen, was man noch hinzufügen könnte, wäre ich auch dankbar
Die Firma möchte, dass man in dem LoM darlegt was man von dem Praktikum für sich selbst erwartet und argumentiert, warum die Firma sich für den Bewerbenden entscheiden soll.Dear Sir or Madam
I hereby apply for ______ month internship with your company.
I am currently studying ________ at the _____________ University, Germany and I will graduate this summer with the degree Bachelor of ______. For the time after my graduation I am looking for an opportunity to serve an internship in _____ to collect international working experience and learn about the _____ culture and society. On the career website of _____ I found an advert for an internship that immediately interested me very much.
By serving an internship at _____ I expect valuable international working experience in a professional environment. I am hoping to learn new working methods and gain practical experience by applying learned knowledge from the time of my study. As well as an opportunity to connect my interest for a foreign culture with the chance to enhance my career profile.
I see myself qualified for an internship at _____, because I adapt quickly to new surroundings and situations. I work towards my aims and I see myself as a team-player wherefore I like it to work in teams that share the same level of commitment like I do.
Please find herewith my Curriculum Vitae as well as a list of actual marks. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
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