What makes people happy?

[andy55]

Our teacher wants to know, what we are thinking about happiness.
Whe shall prepare a brief summary to this theme.

And here is my essay.

What makes people happy?

This is my birefly essay to the theme of happiness.

I think it is a difficalt question.
Why?
Because I think it means each of something different.
Some people need financial security for her happiness.
By from each of us that is not very important.

The enjoy her happiness when they have relationsships, or hanging around with her friend or if they spend her part time with the family.
But from my point of view, health is a sinqua non for happiness.
What use the scramble for wealth?
For me a good physical condition and perhaps the mental state ist one of the important factors for happiness.

This was my statement. What are you thinking about?

[Delfino]

Our teacher wants to know, what we think about happiness.
We shall prepare a brief summary about this topic.
Here is my essay:

This is my brief summary about happiness.

What makes people happy?
I think, this is a rather difficult question.
Why, you may ask me?
Because I think it means something different for everyone.
Some people need financial security to be happy while others don't believe in it to be the most important aspect of life.
The gain happiness primarily from their relationships, hanging around with their friends or spending time with their family.
For me being in a good physical condition is the most significant factor for happiness.
What does wealth and money mean without it?
So from my point of view good health and a stable mental state with a positive attribute are the most important factors for happiness.
But this is my opinion only.
What do you think about [happiness / it]?

I think, you shouldn't call your text an essay (structured in 3 parts)
when the teacher asked you to write a summary (usually 1 paragraph).

[Delfino]

They gain happiness primarily from their relationships, ...
They gain happiness primarily from their love relationship, ...

[andy55]

Well thank you for your correction. In my brief summary, there were unfortunately many stupid mistakes. I have a lot to learn.