,ich bitte mal wieder um Korrektur und hoffe, dass jemand Lust und Zeit hat den Auszug zu lesen. Mein Englisch ist immer noch nicht wirklich gut und ich bin wirklich für jede Korrektur dankbar! (Stil, Grammatik etc.)
Danke
The German school education is comparable to the British. In the different parts of Germany, the so called Bundesländer, there are differences in the school education. En general the compulsory school attendance begins with the age of six and ends until the age of eighteen. In Germany exactly as in Great Britain the parents are able to decide what their kids do before they have to go to school. If they send their children to a kindergarten, they have to pay for it, because the government does not support them. When the children are six or seven years old (depending on the childs development) , they go to the primary school ( Grundschule ), which lasts en general, for four years. Except for Berlin and Brandenburg where it takes six years. At the primary school, the children are learning the basics: calculating, reading, writing. Also music, religion and general knowledge count with it. After year four the teachers make a recommendation based on the academic achievements, abilities and interests of each child. This recommendation is responsible for the type of secondary school the child will attend. The secondary general school ( Hauptschule) are suitable for pupils with low scholastic achievements and delivers a basic general education to pupils. After completing five years, they will receive the secondary general school certificate or, if they stay for one year more, the pupils will receive the intermediate school certificate. Another type of school, which is positioned between the secondary general school and the grammar school, is the intermediate school ( Realschule ). There the pupils attend for six years ( 5th grade through 10th grade ) and get a more comprehensive general education. At the end they receive the intermediate school certificate. If they get the intermediate school certificate qualifying, they are authorized to go at a grammar School. In addition they have got the opportunity to attend “an upper-level schools such as a full-time vocational school (Berufsfachschule) or a vocationally oriented upper secondary school (Fachoberschule)”. The main emphasis of secondary general school and intermediate school is on the acquisition of practical knowledge.
gut aufgepasst!
