Ein Geschäftsbrief

[Sabrinar]

HI ihr lieben

ich sollte anhand einpaar vorgaben einen Geschäftsbrief schreiben.
Kann jemand drüber schauen, ob alles auch richtig ist?

Dear Ms Angela Chapman,

Thank you very much for your letter.
I'm very pleased that you invite me to speak at your conference in October.
It will be a wonderful experience for me.
I would be grateful if you could book a room for me for two nights at the Sunflower Hotel. In this letter you are also getting a list of titles for my talk and can you tell me please, wich one the best is. I very much hope, that we all having a fanstatic time at the conference.

Yours sincerely,
Dr Robert Daniels

Vielen dank im Vorraus!!!
ciao

[Keswick (Contributor)]

HI ihr lieben

ich sollte anhand ein paar Vorgaben einen Geschäftsbrief schreiben.
Kann jemand drüber schauen, ob alles auch richtig ist?

Dear Ms Angela Chapman,

Thank you very much for your letter.
I'm very pleased that you invite me to speak at your conference in October.
It will be a wonderful experience for me.
Could you kindly book a room for me for two nights at the Sunflower Hotel. I have included a list of titles for my talk in this letter. Will you please let me know which one you consider the best. I very much hope, that we all having a fanstatic time at the conference.

Yours sincerely,
Dr Robert Daniels

Vielen dank im Vorraus!!!
ciao

[Sabrinar]

Vielen lieben dank Keswick!!!