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Hi!

Ich will mich für ein Praktikum in Südafrika bewerben und habe dafür ein Bewerbungsanschreiben verfasst! Könnte das vllt. mal jemand durchlesen? :roll: Schonmal vielen Dank im voraus!
LG Janina

Dear Mr. *****,

With great interest I have read your job advertisement on the internship website praktikum.info. Due to my current position as Online Marketing Manger within a study project, I already have experience in this area.

I'm studying international business and languages with focus on Marketing at the Avans university of applied science in 's-Hertogenbosch, the Netherlands. Thanks to the ideal combination of foreign languages, Marketing, international Management and the practically oriented education I've chosen for this study.
Each semester I need to realize two group projects. Thereby I already had the possibility to write a promotion plan, an communication plan, a country analysis as well as an export plan.

At the moment I work together with five fellow students on the project „Student Company“. The goal of this project is to build up our own company and to launch a product successfully on international markets. Like mentioned above, I'm responsible for the Online Marketing. This function requires a high operational readiness, good internet skills and creativity.

My international orientated study, my independent working skills and last but not least my fluency are the best requirements for an internship in your company!

For further information, please feel free to contact me at anytime. I greatly appreciate your interest and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

*****

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Tschakaranda hat geschrieben:Hi!

Ich will mich für ein Praktikum in Südafrika bewerben und habe dafür ein Bewerbungsanschreiben verfasst! Könnte das vielleicht mal jemand durchlesen? :roll: Schon einmal vielen Dank im voraus!
LG Janina

Dear Mr. *****,

With great interest I have read your job advertisement on the internship website praktikum.info. Due to my current position as Online Marketing Manager within a study project, I already have experience in this area.

I'm studying international business and languages with focus on Marketing at the Avans University of Applied Science in 's-Hertogenbosch in the Netherlands. Thanks to the ideal combination of foreign languages, Marketing, International Management and the practically oriented education I have chosen for this study.
Each semester I need to realize two group projects. Thereby I already had the chance to write a promotion plan, an communication plan, a country analysis as well as an export plan.

At the moment I work together with five fellow students on the project „Student Company“. The goal of this project is to build up our own company and to launch a product successfully on international markets. As mentioned above, I am responsible for the Online Marketing. This function requires a high operational readiness, good internet skills and creativity.

My international orientated study, my independent working skills and last but not least my fluency are the best requirements for an internship in your company!

For further information, please feel free to contact me at anytime. I greatly appreciate your interest and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

*****
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Vielen Dank! :)