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Between 1754 and 1763 Britain and France fought over land in America. Britain won all the land east of the Mississippi River. Britain was deepls in debt when it was over. The colonists reacted by passing lwas. They intruduces new acts for example sugar act and stamp act. So people sould pay taxes for sugar and on paper uncluding newspaper. The colonies were not represented in British Parliament. But their opinion was "No taxation without representation". In 1770 was the Boston Massacre. 4000 British soldiers were sent to Boston. The people started the anti Bristish riot. Large crowd throw stones at small grups of soldiers. The soldiers shoot into the crowd. The resuld was that five people died. The colonial propaganda called the event a "massacre". In1773 was a new law. Only the east india company can sell tea to other colonies. Because the tea was cheaper thamn tea from other sources. So the shops in colonies couldn´t compete. The colonists would that no tea will be unloaded in Boston. So the colonists throw the tea from British ships into Boston Habor. In 1775 was the Battle of Lexington and Concord.The British wanted arrest anti British leaders at Lexington and Concord. So British soldiers march from Boston. A lamp in a Boston church signals the start of british attack to the colonist Paul Revere. Revere rides to warn people of Lexington snd Concord. The result of the first real war of Independenc was the dead of 247 british soldiers and 95 american patriots. An1776 was the declaration of independence. It declared the thirteen colonies independed of British. The question reights of the king was " We hold these truths to be self evident that all men are created equal. It contained a list of wrongs that should be rightes. The british reaction was the declare war.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Between 1754 and 1763 Great Britain and France fought over land in America. Great Britain won all the land east of the Mississippi River, but was deeply in debt when the war was over.
The British government (Aufgepasst: wenn die Kolonien selber Steuern erlassen hätten, wären sie ja nicht böse darüber gewesen, nicht?) reacted by passing new tax laws. They introduced new acts for example the Sugar Act and the Stamp Act. The colonists had to pay taxes on sugar and on paper, including newspapers.
The colonies were not represented in British Parliament, though. So their opinion was "No taxation without representation".
In 1770 there occured an incident later called the "Boston Massacre". 4000 British soldiers were sent to Boston. The colonists started an anti Bristish riot. Large crowds threw stones at small groups of soldiers. The soldiers shoot into the crowd. The result was that five people died. The colonial propaganda called the event a "massacre".
In 1773 a new law was enacted. Only the British East India Company was allowed to sell tea to the colonies. Due to the fact that the tea was cheaper thamn tea from other sources, the shops in the colonies couldn't compete. The colonists didn't want any tea to be unloaded in Boston. So they dressed up as Indians and threw the tea from British ships into Boston Harbor. This incident was later called the "Boston Tea Party".
In 1775 there was the "Battle of Lexington and Concord". The British wanted to arrest anti British leaders at Lexington and Concord. So British soldiers marched from Boston. A lamp in a Boston church signalled the start of the British attack to the colonist Paul Revere. Revere hastened to warn the people of Lexington and Concord.
The result of the first real battle of Independence was the death of 247 British soldiers and 95 American patriots.
In 1776 followed the "Declaration of Independence". It declared the thirteen colonies to be independent of British rule. The question reights of the king was (Hier weiß ich nicht, was Du meinst) The famous opening words of the Declaration of Independence are: "We hold these truths to be self evident that all men are created equal." It contained a list of wrongs that should be made right. The British reaction was to declare war.

Hallo Du,
an sich ein guter Text, aber leider wirklich viele Fehler. Um die Wahrheit zu sagen, das nächste Mal werde ich so einen Text nicht korrigieren, denn viele der Fehler hättest Du selber gefunden, wenn Du den Text noch einmal durchgelesen hättest, bevor Du ihn hier einstellst! Also nächstes Mal bitte selber genauer nachgucken, OK?

Viel Glück für das Referat!

Grüße
Duckduck

[schadzzz-bella]

ok ich werde mir beim nächsten mal mehr mühe geben
viele dank für das korigieren