,könnte jemand mal über diese zwei kurzen Ausschnitte gucken, da ich echt schlecht in Englisch bin, jedoch meine Facharbeit gerade darin schreibe... Ich bin um jeden Verbesserungsvorschlag echt dankbar.
It is proved that everything has an impact on the development of a child. That means that every situation, every experience, the circumstance and also the personal background of a child have an immeasurable effect on the development. Especially the school life shapes a child, because you spend the most time of your development in school. It is confronted with different types of people and situation, school sets limits, which must be adhered. Besides it learns to take responsibility for oneself and for other. The result of which is that different school systems have different effects on the development of a child, because every system makes several demands and offer several prerequisites. I will set explain this with a example from the differences between the English and German school system, how I elaborate on the point before.
One main point is that the English pupils have the duty to carry a school uniform. It is to prevent bullying from spreading further. The kids often talk about the clothes and where are this clothes from ( brand name or no name) . When it is not the new T-shirt, the new jeans which have everyone or it is not by a brand name, the pupils will blaspheme or bully the child to the point that the child will exclude. Just because it do not dressing clothes by brand name or the clothes which in colloquial language called “in”. School uniform take away the pressure of having brand name clothes. So the child have not scared to go at school when it does not dressing this. Parents often can not afford buying expensive clothes for their children.
, aber auch anscheinend mit ein paar ganz guten Sachen 
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