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Girly123

Bitte um dringende korrektur

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Ich muss zu morgen ein paar sätze zu multikulturelle probleme schreiben... Und ich glaub das das alles nicht ganz so stimmt... Also hoffe ich das da jemand mal rüber schauen kann!!

When you are living in an multicultural society, you have a immigration and integration from ethnic groups and linguistic and cultural diversity.
In a multicultural society, the cultural fragmentation is usually spread out very strong. It should, always a degree of solidarity present.Anybody should not lose their mutual respect for others and make the other more common and are not afraid. Moreover, it is important that a social harmony between humans exists, as the only way you can achieve much. But everyone should be his or her cultural identity still remain faithful to one piece and do not forget where he comes from.

Keswick (Contributor)

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Poste deine Anfrage das naechste Mal bitte frueher, damit wir auch genug Zeit haben dein Posting zu korrigieren. Danke!

Achte ausserdem bitte auf deine Gross- und Kleinschreibung. Danke!
Girly123 hat geschrieben:Ich muss zu morgen ein paar Sätze zu multikulturelle Probleme schreiben... Und ich glaube, dass das alles nicht ganz so stimmt... Also hoffe ich das da jemand mal darüber schauen kann!!

When you are living in an multicultural society, you have an immigration and integration of ethnic groups and thus a linguistic and cultural diversity.
In a multicultural society, the cultural fragmentation is usually spread out very strongly. A degree of solidarity should always be present. Nobody should lose their mutual respect for the others and hence make the immigrants feel more accepted and less afraid of the new situation. Moreover, it is important that a social harmony exists between humans, as this is the only way you can achieve much (das musst du schon ausfuehren, denn so allgemein macht das leider wenig Sinn). But everyone should keep their own cultural identity still remain faithful to one piece (Das macht keinen Sinn)and do not forget where they come from.

Girly123

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Danke schön!!!!