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[DOM]

Hallo liebe Forengemeinde,
ich möchte mich nur kurz vorstellen und erläutern worum es mir geht.
Mein Name ist Dominic und ich bin 23 Jahre alt. Ich komme aus NRW(Deutschland) und studiere in den Niederlanden. Ich muss im Rahmen des Studiums eine Literaturstudie zum Thema Web shop schreiben...auf Englisch natürlich...
Der folgende Teil ist nur ein kleiner Auszug , könntet ihr ihn euch vieleicht mal durchlesen und korrigieren, bzw. kommentieren?
Ich wäre euch sehr dankbar.
Vielen Dank im Vorraus für eure Mühe

Beste Grüße
Dominic

Definition:

Web shops or online shops are instruments of the e-commerce (electronic trade). The web shop forms a virtual place for the sale of goods, services and digital products in the internet. Every web shop belongs to a “real” company that cares for the order handling, the disposal and the delivery of the products. The central characteristic of this kind of transaction is the close relation between the seller and the end customer.

According to Ferguson the use of a web shop means that the customer has not to get in contact with an employee of the company in order to use the applications and information given in the shop.

Koether (2009) says that web shops can be subdivided into four particular categories. These categories differ in their target audience.

• B2B (Business to Business)
• B2C (Business to Consumer)
• C2B (Consumer to Business)
• C2C (Consumer to Consumer)

The most common forms are the B2B shops and the B2C shops. B2B on the one hand stands for the ecommerce relation between commercial suppliers and commercial users (Henning in 2007, p. 600). B2C on the other hand means the ecommerce relation between commercial suppliers and private end users (Henning in 2007, p. 597).


Terms and conditions for the use of web shops in a company

For the efficient use of a web shop within a company some requirements according to the information technology have to be met. At first the company has to buy the software it needs to run an online shop. Then this software has to be linked to the enterprise resource system and the payment system of the concern.

Besides, the company has to check whether the new way of selling is suitable for its products. Most adequate for a web shop are products that can be downloaded by the costumer. This could be software, music, films, photos, engineering drawings, charts, newspaper articles et cetera. In addition to that the use of a web shop could be very profitable for companies that sell niche products. By using a web shop those niche products would be available for everyone, everywhere at every time. In this case the build-up of a dealer network would not make sense.
Products that are not recommendable for sale via online shop are perishable goods. As the delivery of the goods could take a few days this way of selling could mean a loss in quality. Furthermore it is not recommendable to sell very cheap products via internet because the costumers prefer to buy those goods in a store.

Furthermore the company has to find out whether its target group uses the internet for buying or not. If the result of this research should say, that the average costumer avoids online shops, the company has to find a different way of selling its products.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hi DOM und willkommen im Forum!

Definition:

Web shops or online shops are instruments of the e-commerce (electronic trade). The web shop forms a virtual place for the sale of goods, services and digital products on the internet. Every web shop belongs to a “real” company that takes care of the order handling, the disposal and the delivery of the products. The central characteristic of this kind of transaction is the close relation between the seller and the end customer.

According to Ferguson (bibl. Angabe?) the use of a web shop means that the customer does not have to get in contact with an employee of the company in order to use the applications and information given in the shop.

Koether (2009 Seitenzahl?) says that web shops can be subdivided into four particular categories. These categories differ in their target audience.

• B2B (Business to Business)
• B2C (Business to Consumer)
• C2B (Consumer to Business)
• C2C (Consumer to Consumer)

The most common forms are the B2B shops and the B2C shops. B2B on the one hand stands for the e-commerce relation between commercial suppliers and commercial users (Henning in 2007, p. 600). B2C on the other hand means the e-commerce relation between commercial suppliers and private end users (Henning in 2007, p. 597). (das "on the one hand...on the other hand" ist hier inhaltlich nicht so schön, denn es ist von 2 unterschiedlichen Dingen die Rede. Hier würde ich "Whereas B2B stands for..., B2C means..." vorschlagen)


Terms and conditions for the use of web shops in a company

For the efficient use of a web shop within a company some requirements according to the information technology have to be met. Firstly, the company has to buy the software it needs to run an online shop. Secondly, this software has to be linked to the enterprise resource system and the payment system of the concern.

Besides, the company has to check whether the new way of selling is suitable for its products. Products that can be downloaded by the customer are the most adequate ones for a web shop. This could be software, music, films, photos, engineering drawings, charts, newspaper articles et cetera. In addition to that, the use of a web shop could be very profitable for companies that sell niche products. By using a web shop those niche products would be available for anyone, anywhere at any time. In this case, the buildup of a dealer network would not make sense.
Products that are not recommendable for sale via online shop are perishable goods. As the delivery of the goods could take a few days, this way of selling could mean a loss in quality. Furthermore, it is not recommendable to sell very cheap products via internet because the customers prefer buying those goods in a store.

Furthermore, the company has to find out whether its target group uses the internet for buying or not. If the result of this research shows that the average customer avoids online shops, the company will have to find a different way of selling its products.

Great text!
Beachte "customer" aber "consumer"

Weiter so!
Duckduck

[DOM]

Hey Duckduck,
vielen Dank für die Korrektur auf sehr hohem Niveau...
Bin total begeistert, dass es Leute wie dich gibt. Du hast mir echt sehr weiter geholfen!
Besten Gruß und ein schönes Wochenende an alle!

PS: Werde eventuell die Tage nochmal was zur Korrektur hier einstellen. Hoffe ihr erschlagt mch dann nicht

[Delfino]

Furthermore, the company has to find out whether its target group uses
(or considers the use of) the internet for buying the goods / services offered or not.

If the result of this market research shows
that the average customer / member of the target group avoids online shops,
the producing company will have to find
a different way of selling its products. /
a different "channel" for distributing its products.

The Harvard System of referencing does not require the page number for paraphrased content
and we, the students of computer science, are encouraged to use as little direct citations as possible.

links to some public pages of my university:

http://portal-live.solent.ac.uk/library ... _home.aspx

http://www.solent.ac.uk/Library/informe ... g/tips.stm

http://www.google.co.uk/search?q=harvar ... eferencing


I'd strongly recommend you look for information about citation at you local library or university department.