Referat über das Buch Oliver Twist

[Fadsaugdavid]

Hallo zusammen!

Also, ich habe nächste Woche eine Englisch Referat über das Buch Oliver Twist.
Ich habe jetzt das Buch schon gelesen und muss eine kurze Zusammenfassung schreiben, die ich der Klasse dann präsentieren soll.

Hier ist der Text:

Oliver’s mother died shortly after his birth. So Oliver grew up in a poorhouse. - Leseprobe, wie Oliver is Heim kam und den Master um mehr essen gefragt hat. Darauf verkauft der Master Oliver an Mr Sowerberry - At the next day the master took Oliver to Mr Sowerberry, but Oliver ran away.
He ran to London, in London he met Jack Dawkins. Jack took Oliver to Fagin and Bill Sikes.
Fagin was a old man who taught young boys to steal and Bill Sikes was a brutal man who had no home and stayed sometimes with Fagin.
One day Oliver went out with the other boys and saw how the boys stole Mr Brownlow’s handkerchief and ran away but Oliver ran to slow, so the constable saw only Oliver and arrested him.
Oliver refused to admit his guilt, thus the constable couldn’t prove Oliver guilty. And Mr Brownlow trusted Oliver. So the constable released Oliver and Mr Brownlow took Oliver into his house.
From then on Fagin feared that Oliver could tell on him, because of that he caught Oliver. Fagin forced Oliver to break into a house with Bill Sikes. But the owner of the house saw Oliver and shot at him, Bill Sikes ran away and Oliver laid on the ground.
At the next morning, Oliver still laid on the ground covered in blood. Mr Giles, the owner of the house, felt pity for Oliver and took him into his house. Oliver was happy with his new situation but then he saw Fagin outside the window and he was afraid again.
A few days later, Nancy a maidservant of Fagin overheard a conversation of Fagin and Bill Sikes. They made a plan! - They wanted to catch Oliver again. Nancy tried to contact Rose Maylie who was a good friend of Oliver. Nancy tried to warn Rose of Fagin. Unfortunately Bill Sikes noticed that Nancy told somebody his plan and killed her.
Now Bill was a murdere and he tried to escape. He climbed a house which was next to the river. He tied one end of a rope tightly around the chimney then he tied the other end around himself. While he was doing that he lost balance! He fell back and dropped off the roof. The rope suddenly moved and was wrapped around his neck.
He fell thirty feet, and then there was a sudden stop. His body hung against the wall. - He was dead.
After Bill Sikes’ death the police arrested Fagin and hung him. And Oliver moved back to Mr Brownlow . . .


You would do me a big favor, if someone checked the text for mistakes! (ist der If - Satz grammatikalisch richtig?)

Viele Grüße!
David

[joy]

Hier ist der Text:

Oliver’s mother died shortly after his birth. So Oliver grew up in a poorhouse. - Leseprobe, wie Oliver ins Heim kam und den Master um mehr Essen gefragt hat. Darauf verkauft der Master Oliver an Mr Sowerberry -

At The next day the master took Oliver to Mr Sowerberry, but Oliver ran away. He ran to London, in London where he met Jack Dawkins. Jack took Oliver to Fagin and Bill Sikes. Fagin was an old man who taught young boys to steal and Bill Sikes was a brutal man who had no home and stayed sometimes with Fagin. One day Oliver went out with the other boys and saw how the boys stole Mr Brownlow’s handkerchief and ran away but Oliver ran too slowly, so that the constable saw only Oliver and arrested him. Oliver refused to admit his guilt, thus the constable couldn’t prove Oliver’s guilty. And Mr Brownlow trusted Oliver. So the constable released Oliver and Mr Brownlow took Oliver into his house.

From then on Fagin feared that Oliver could tell on him, and because of that he caught Oliver. Fagin forced Oliver to break into a house with Bill Sikes. But the owner of the house saw Oliver and shot at him. Bill Sikes ran away and Oliver laid lay on the ground. At The next morning, Oliver was still laying on the ground covered in blood. Mr Giles, the owner of the house, felt pity for Oliver and took him into his house. Oliver was happy with his new situation but then he saw Fagin outside the window and he was afraid again.

A few days later, Nancy a maidservant of Fagin overheard a conversation of Fagin and Bill Sikes. They made a plan! - They wanted to catch Oliver again. Nancy tried to contact Rose Maylie who was a good friend of Oliver. Nancy tried to warn Rose of Fagin’s plan. Unfortunately Bill Sikes noticed that Nancy had told somebody his plan and killed her.

Now Bill was a murderer and he tried to escape. He climbed a roof of a house which was next to the river. He tied one end of a rope tightly around the chimney then he tied the other end around himself. While he was doing that he lost his balance! He fell back and dropped off the roof. The rope suddenly moved and was wrapped around his neck. He fell thirty feet, and then there was a sudden stop. His body hung against the wall. - He was had died. After Bill Sikes’ death the police arrested Fagin and hung him. And Oliver moved back to Mr Brownlow . . .


You would do me a big favour, if someone checked the text for mistakes! (ist der If - Satz grammatikalisch richtig?) Ja, dieser If-Satz ist richtig.

Viele Grüße!
David

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Hi David
Hier sind ein paar Korrekturen von mir (ohne Gewähr). Es wäre schön, wenn auch noch andere diesen Text anschauen würden.
Viel Glück
joy

[Fadsaugdavid]

Danke joy für deine Antwort!

Super Korrektur! - Auf machne Fehler wäre ich nicht drauf gekommen!
Vielleicht schaut sich noch jemand anderes meinen Text an.

Grüße David

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hier ist der Text:

Oliver’s father was unknown and his mother died shortly after his birth. So Oliver grew up in a poorhouse. - Leseprobe, wie Oliver ins Heim kam und den Master um mehr Essen gefragt hat. Darauf verkauft der Master Oliver an Mr Sowerberry -

At Oder: On the.. The next day the master took Oliver to Mr Sowerberry, but Oliver ran away. He went to London, in London where he met Jack Dawkins. Jack took Oliver to Fagin and Bill Sikes. Fagin was an old man who taught young boys to steal and Bill Sikes was a brutal man who had no home and sometimes stayed with Fagin. One day Oliver went out with the other boys and saw how they stole a Mr Brownlow’s handkerchief. They all ran away, but Oliver ran too slowly, so that the constable saw only Oliver and arrested him. Oliver refused to admit his guilt, thus the constable couldn’t prove Oliver guilty (das ist richtig so "prove sb guilty" oder "prove sb's guilt"). And Mr Brownlow trusted Oliver. So the constable released him and Mr Brownlow took the boy into his house.

From then on Fagin feared that Oliver could tell on him, and because of that he caught Oliver. Fagin forced Oliver to break into a house with Bill Sikes. But the owner of the house saw Oliver and shot at him. Bill Sikes ran away and Oliver laid lay on the ground. At On the/ The next morning, Oliver was still lying (hier lohnt es sich, die Stammformen von "lie" = "liegen" und "lay" = "legen" mal anzuschauen!) on the ground, covered in blood. Mr Giles, the owner of the house, felt pity for Oliver and took him into his house. Oliver was happy with his new situation, but then he saw Fagin outside the window and he was afraid again.

A few days later, Nancy -a maidservant of Fagin's- overheard a conversation between Fagin and Bill Sikes. They were making a plan! - They wanted to catch Oliver again. Nancy tried to contact Rose Maylie who was a good friend of Oliver's. Nancy tried to warn Rose of Fagin’s plan. Unfortunately Bill Sikes noticed that Nancy had told on him and killed her.

Now Bill was a murderer and he tried to escape. He climbed the roof of a house which was next to the river. He tied one end of a rope tightly around the chimney then he tied the other end around himself. While he was doing that he lost his balance! He fell back and dropped off the roof. The rope suddenly moved and was wrapped around his neck. He fell thirty feet, and then there was a sudden stop. His body hung against the wall. - He was dead. After Bill Sikes’ death the police arrested Fagin and hanged (ich komme der Nachfrage zuvor und erläutere es gleich: "eine Person hängen" hat regelmäßige Stammformen "hang, hanged, hanged") him. And Oliver moved back to Mr Brownlow . . .


Viele Grüße!
David

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Hi David
Hier sind ein paar Korrekturen von mir (ohne Gewähr). Es wäre schön, wenn auch noch andere diesen Text anschauen würden.
Viel Glück
joy

Kuckuck says Duckduck,
da komme ich doch gleich mal wieder hinterher gewatschelt. Toller Text, David, tolle Korrektur, joy!

Grüße

[Fadsaugdavid]

Danke Duckduck für die Korrektur der Korrektur!
Deine Korrektur ist aber mit Gewähr, oder Duckduck?

Tja, ...
Wie ich sehe waren doch noch so einige Fehler im Text enthaten, mein Englisch Niveau ist gesunken!

Grüße David

[joy]

Auch vielen Dank Duckduck - Ich sehe, es gibt noch einige Aha's!

Liebe Grüsse
joy