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Svenja09

Brauch eure Hilfe. Bitte mal drüber schauen :D

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Hallo,
wir mussten im Unterricht eine Rede von Robin Cook "Chicken Tikka Massala" lesen und zusammen fassen, wie seine Meinung ist. Wäre lieb wenn ihr mal drüber schauen würdet, wiel ich bin nicht gut in Englisch.
Danke :D

Robin Cook was a British Foreign Secretary. He gave a speech about Britain on 19, April, 2001. In his speech he tells us that the British are not a race, they are an assembly of different races. The majority of the people who live in Britain are not born there, so they are not native. But this is not a disadvantage because according to Robin Cook, the multiculturalism is the base element of Britain. You need relations with foreign countries to strengthen the economy and for the security of the nation.
Britain must greet (begrüßen) the newcomers but despite (trotzden) every country need firm but fair immigrants laws.
In his speech Robin also refers that Britain is the native land of 30 different ethnic groups which speak over 300 laguages. Britain must accept the pluralism because it brings cultural and economic advantages for the country. One of this advantages is the example of the airline of a European country, because the airline has been mislaid (wurde verlegt) to London because of the linguistig variety.
Chicken Tikka Massala is the true British national dish. This food explains (macht deutlich) that Britain is a multicultural mix because Chicken Tikka Massala is from India and is not a typical British recipe. All in all Britain is a cosmopolitan country, which is characterised by the different ethnic communities.

Lg Svenja

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: Brauch eure Hilfe. Bitte mal drüber schauen :D

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Svenja09 hat geschrieben:Hallo,
wir mussten im Unterricht eine Rede von Robin Cook "Chicken Tikka Massala" lesen und zusammen fassen, wie seine Meinung ist. Wäre lieb wenn ihr mal drüber schauen würdet, denn ich bin nicht gut in Englisch.
Danke :D

Robin Cook was a British Foreign Secretary. He gave a speech about Britain on 19, April, 2001. In his speech he tells us that the British are not a race, but an assembly of different races. The majority of the people who live in Britain were not born there, so they are not native. But this is not a disadvantage because according to Robin Cook, the multiculturalism is the base element of Britain. You need relations to foreign countries in order to strengthen the economy as well as for the security of the nation.
So Britain should bid the newcomers welcome on the one hand, but on the other hand every country needs a firm but fair Immigrant Act.
In his speech Robin Cook also mentions that Britain is the native land of 30 different ethnic groups within which over 300 languages are spoken. Britain must accept this pluralism because it brings cultural and economic advantages for the country. One of these advantages is, for example, that the airline of a European country was moved to London because of the city's linguistic variety.
Chicken Tikka Massala counts as a truly British national dish. This fact makes clear that Britain is a multicultural mix: Chicken Tikka Massala is originally from India. All in all, Britain is a cosmopolitan country and characterised by its different ethnic communities.

Lg Svenja
Well done!

Duckduck

Delfino

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I think, this sounds a bit better:
Duckduck hat geschrieben:
Svenja09 hat geschrieben: One of these advantages is, for example, that the headquarters of a European airline was moved to London because of the city's linguistic variety.
or was an entire state owned airline moved to London?

Duckduck (Contributor)

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Hi Delfino,

You're right of course! Thanks! Nice to have you back. :freu:

Duckduck

Svenja09

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dannkeeee :D habt mir sehr geholfen