Hallo zusammen, bin neu hier im Forum und möchte euch herzlich begrüßen.
Ich brauche dringend eure Hilfe bei meinem Englisch-Kurzreferat in der Schule (Thema Coca Cola).
Ich bitte euch mein Referat anzuschauen und gegebenenfalls zu korrigieren.
Vielen Dank im Voraus.
Refreshments from the company Coca-Cola are the favored choice of many people everywhere in the world today. With over 400 brands and 2,400 different products the international Coca-Cola organization is the number one in the production, marketing and the sale of refreshments. More than 600,000 employees work in this system in over 200 countries.
They take care that the people can refresh themselves with Coca-Cola products everywhere in the world.
Refreshments like sport drinks, iced tea, iced coffee, fruit juices and juice drinks belong to the products as well as still and sparkling mineral water of different tastes
The product range contains Coca-Cola, Coca-Cola light, Coca-Cola Zero, Fanta, Sprite, Mezzo mix, Powerade, NESTEA, Cappy, Illy Eiskaffee, Römerquelle, Römerquelle emotion.
History
The product with the unique taste was born in Atlanta, in the American southern state Georgia on May 8th, 1886. Dr. John S. Pemberton, a druggist, invented the syrup made from herbs for the popular drink. The syrup was intended for tiredness, weakness and headaches.
The mixture, combined with carbonated water, was something special and so stimulating that soon in Jacob’, at that time the biggest refreshment hall of Atlanta, became a popular thirst quencher: Coca-Cola.
The demand for Coca-Cola increased more and more still beyond Atlanta. In 1888 Pemberton sold the rights to the businessman Asa G. Candler at a price of 2,300 dollars!
1892 Candler founded together with his brother and Pemberton's former business partner Frank Robinson, "The Coca-Cola Company". In 1893 they registered the name Coca-Cola in the U.S. Patent Office as a trademark.
In 1919 the children of Asa G. Candler sold the rights of Coca-Cola, formerly purchased for 2,300 dollars, to an American association of banks for 25 million dollars under the chairmanship of Ernest Woodruff.
His son Robert became president of the company in 1923. Robert W. Woodruff was the perfect businessman with completely new ideas of sale methods. He had primarily the vision to make Coca-Cola available for everyone in the whole world.
Advertising
The first advertising topic for Coca-Cola was introduced in 1886. Since then, Coca-Cola always advertises with new messages and slogans which have always one thing in common:
The refreshment with Coca-Cola
Today the product still is sold according to three principles:
1. Coca-Cola shall become a part of the daily people life
2. The drink shall afford itself to everybody
3. Coca-Cola shall be bought everywhere there where people are thirsty
Sponsoring
Coca-Cola is present everywhere where people are engaged in physical activities to look on their athletes and idols or to be thrilled at events.
With the initiative in the sports area Coca-Cola engages for an active lifestyle.
Bitte um Korrektur
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michael123
Re: Bitte um Korrektur
Refreshments from the company Coca-Cola are a favourite choice of many people all over the world today. With over 400 brands and 2,400 different products, the international Coca-Cola organization is the number one in the production, marketing and the sale of refreshments. More than 600,000 employees work in this system in over 200 countries. They take care that the people can refresh themselves with Coca-Cola products the world over.
Refreshments like sport drinks, iced tea, iced coffee, fruit juices and juice drinks belong to the range as well as still and sparkling mineral water of different tastes. The company's brands include Coca-Cola, Coca-Cola light, Coca-Cola Zero, Fanta, Sprite, Mezzo mix, Powerade, NESTEA, Cappy, Illy Eiskaffee, Römerquelle, Römerquelle emotion.
The product with the unique taste was born in Atlanta, in the American southern state Georgia on May 8th, 1886. Dr. John S. Pemberton, a druggist, invented the syrup, made from herbs, for the popular drink. The syrup was intended for tiredness, weakness and headaches.
The mixture, combined with carbonated water, was something special and so stimulating that it soon became a popular thirst quencher in Jacob’ s , at that time the biggest refreshment hall of Atlanta: Coca-Cola. The demand for Coca-Cola increased more and more still beyond Atlanta. In 1888 Pemberton sold the rights to the businessman Asa G. Candler at a price of 2,300 dollars!
1892 Candler founded, together with his brother, and Pemberton's former business partner Frank Robinson, "The Coca-Cola Company". In 1893 they registered the name Coca-Cola with the U.S. Patent Office as a trademark. In 1919 the children of Asa G. Candler sold the rights of Coca-Cola, formerly purchased for 2,300 dollars, to an American association of banks for 25 million dollars under the chairmanship of Ernest Woodruff. His son Robert became president of the company in 1923. Robert W. Woodruff was the perfect businessman with completely new ideas about methods of sale. He was the first to have the vision to make Coca-Cola available for everyone in the whole world.
Advertising
The first advertising topic for Coca-Cola was introduced in 1886. Since then, Coca-Cola always advertises with new messages and slogans which have always one thing in common:
The refreshment with Coca-Cola
Today the product still is sold according to three principles:
1. Coca-Cola shall become a part of people's daily lives
2. The drink shall be affordable to all
3. Coca-Cola should be available wherever people are thirsty
Sponsoring
Coca-Cola logos are ubiquitous at major sporting events, wherever people are looking at their atheletes and idols. With the initiative in the sports area, Coca-Cola encourages an active lifestyle.
Very good English. Try to use some different expressions for "everywhere in the world", e.g. "the world over", "all over the world", "accross the globe" etc. The last paragraph was a bit dodgey, the others were great though.
Refreshments like sport drinks, iced tea, iced coffee, fruit juices and juice drinks belong to the range as well as still and sparkling mineral water of different tastes. The company's brands include Coca-Cola, Coca-Cola light, Coca-Cola Zero, Fanta, Sprite, Mezzo mix, Powerade, NESTEA, Cappy, Illy Eiskaffee, Römerquelle, Römerquelle emotion.
The product with the unique taste was born in Atlanta, in the American southern state Georgia on May 8th, 1886. Dr. John S. Pemberton, a druggist, invented the syrup, made from herbs, for the popular drink. The syrup was intended for tiredness, weakness and headaches.
The mixture, combined with carbonated water, was something special and so stimulating that it soon became a popular thirst quencher in Jacob’ s , at that time the biggest refreshment hall of Atlanta: Coca-Cola. The demand for Coca-Cola increased more and more still beyond Atlanta. In 1888 Pemberton sold the rights to the businessman Asa G. Candler at a price of 2,300 dollars!
1892 Candler founded, together with his brother, and Pemberton's former business partner Frank Robinson, "The Coca-Cola Company". In 1893 they registered the name Coca-Cola with the U.S. Patent Office as a trademark. In 1919 the children of Asa G. Candler sold the rights of Coca-Cola, formerly purchased for 2,300 dollars, to an American association of banks for 25 million dollars under the chairmanship of Ernest Woodruff. His son Robert became president of the company in 1923. Robert W. Woodruff was the perfect businessman with completely new ideas about methods of sale. He was the first to have the vision to make Coca-Cola available for everyone in the whole world.
Advertising
The first advertising topic for Coca-Cola was introduced in 1886. Since then, Coca-Cola always advertises with new messages and slogans which have always one thing in common:
The refreshment with Coca-Cola
Today the product still is sold according to three principles:
1. Coca-Cola shall become a part of people's daily lives
2. The drink shall be affordable to all
3. Coca-Cola should be available wherever people are thirsty
Sponsoring
Coca-Cola logos are ubiquitous at major sporting events, wherever people are looking at their atheletes and idols. With the initiative in the sports area, Coca-Cola encourages an active lifestyle.
Very good English. Try to use some different expressions for "everywhere in the world", e.g. "the world over", "all over the world", "accross the globe" etc. The last paragraph was a bit dodgey, the others were great though.
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Lukas2704
Re: Bitte um Korrektur
Ich möchte mich nochmals herzlich für die Korrektur des Referates bedanken.
Ganz besonderen Dank an michael123 für Ihre Hilfe.
Ich hoffe ich kann beim nächsten Mal wieder auf Ihre Unterstützung zählen.
Ganz besonderen Dank an michael123 für Ihre Hilfe.
Ich hoffe ich kann beim nächsten Mal wieder auf Ihre Unterstützung zählen.