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[FanE]

Hello

I need your help.

Wir schreiben bald eine Englischarbeit und da sollen wir über das 1. Kapitel eines Buches u.a. eine summary schreibe. Ich habe jetzt mal eine geschrieben, weis aber nicht ob ich mit der Grammatik richtig bin. Wäre sehr nett wenn ihr mir helfen könntet.

Cal is a 19-year-old boy and he lives alone wiht his fahter Shamie in a town in North Irland. They are catholics. In North Irland is a conflict between catholics and protestant. They MC Cluskeys are einzige catholics in this protestand area.
Cal has stopped the work in the abattair, because he doesn´t like the smell. Cal goes in the library and saw a womam with name Marcella and he tries to get contact with her. His father talk him her name ist Marcella Morton. Cal knews that he and his old classmade Crilly do made him (gemacht bzw. getan haben).
Cal,Crilly and Skeffington are in a group, this group plan attacs and robberies. Cal want gets out the group because he doesn´t like valency (Gewalt). Shamie and Cal get the second warning that they should pull away. But will be burned your house.(sonst wird euer Haus verbrant). The first chapter ended that Cal dreams of a nice woman thet she need help because she falling down wot of the window but Cal cannot help her.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hello

I need your help.

Wir schreiben bald eine Englischarbeit und da sollen wir über das 1. Kapitel eines Buches u.a. eine summary schreibe. Ich habe jetzt mal eine geschrieben, weiß aber nicht, ob ich mit der Grammatik richtig bin. Wäre sehr nett wenn ihr mir helfen könntet.

Willkommen im Forum!

Cal is a 19-year-old boy and he lives alone with his father Shamie in a town in Northern Ireland. They are catholics. In Northern Ireland there is a conflict between catholics and protestants. They Mc Cluskeys are the only catholics in this protestant area.
Cal has given up working in the abattoir, because he doesn't like (oder "can't stand") the smell. Cal goes to the library and sees a woman there. He tries to get to know her. His father tells him that her name ist Marcella Morton. Cal knows that he and his old classmade Crilly do made him (gemacht bzw. getan haben) (Dieser Satz gibt für mich gar keinen Sinn!).
Cal, Crilly and Skeffington are in a group that plans attacks and robberies. Cal wants to get out, because he doesn't like violence. Shamie and Cal get the second warning that they should move away, because otherwise their house would be burnt down. The first chapter ends with Cal dreaming of a nice woman who needs help because she is falling out of a window. But Cal cannot help her.

So, da waren ja eigentlich mehr Rechtschreibfehler als Grammatikfehler drin. Pass bitte auf und checke die Rechtschreibung!!! Außerdem beachte, dass Du in einer Zeitform bleiben musst, vorzugsweise Präsens.

Good luck says
Duckduck

[FanE]

Vielen Dank für deine/Ihre Hilfe.