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[faruk84]

Hallo, Ihr habt eine wunderbare Seite, sowas habe ich seit langem gesucht.

Ich möchte hier jeden Tag meine Erlebnisse auf Englisch beschreiben, es würde mir sehr helfen wenn Ihr es korrigieren würdets.danke.

Okay, lets begin.Iam 25 years old, and I am Kurdish.Iam for 29 years in Austria.I went here to school.
Iam since 2007 married. Today, I stand up at 9 am, then I brushed my teeth.

For the momemt I am unemployed, and I am looking for a new job.

I am a learned waiter.
For Today its all.
I thank you , for correcting this text.

Have a nice day.
bye

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo, Ihr habt eine wunderbare Seite, sowas habe ich seit langem gesucht.

Ich möchte hier jeden Tag meine Erlebnisse auf Englisch beschreiben, es würde mir sehr helfen wenn Ihr es korrigieren würdets (Nun ist mein "österreichisch" sehr begrenzt, aber das "s" habe ich schon gehört in der gesprochenen Sprache, aber bitte nicht in der geschriebenen Sprache, OK?). Danke.

Hallo faruk und willkommen!

Okay, let's begin. I am 35 years old (Kann es sein, dass Du 35 meinst, sonst gibt der folgende Satz keinen Sinn...?) and I am Kurdish. I have been living in Austria for 29 years. I went to school here.
I got married in 2007. Today, I got up at 9 am, then I brushed my teeth.

Currently, I am unemployed, and I am looking for a new job.

I am an apprenticed waiter.
That's all for today.
I thank you for correcting this text.

Have a nice day.
Bye

Beste Wünsche für einen schönen Tag auch an Dich!

[faruk84]

Hi Duck Duck,

thank you for correcting of my letter.

I saw many mistakes, that i made.(oh god!!!)

Do you have a name, how can I call you?

Yes there was I mistake, I am 25 years old, and I have been in Austria since 19 years.

Today it happend nothing, it was very borring. I consider to move to Graz, it`s better for me and my family.

In Graz there are many jobs, and half of my relatives are there.

Now, I want to introduce me:

I wear glasse, my heigh is 180 cm, and my weight is 75 kg.
I have a daughter, her name is Helin(it´s a Kurdish name, it mean´s "home"), she is one year and 4 months old.
My wife´s name is Serpil, she is 5 years younger as me. She has been in Austria for 3 years.If she were here, she attend a Germany course by Wifi. Now she learn for the driver licence for B.

For today it ´s been a long letter, I thank you again for your effort.

Bye

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hi Duck Duck,

thank you for correcting of my letter.

I saw so many mistakes, that I made. (Oh God!!!)

Do you have a name, how can I call you? Oh yes, I have a name, but I'd like you to just call me Duckduck for the time being, OK?

Yes, there was a mistake, I am 25 years old, and I have been in Austria for 19 years. (Zeitpunkt: "since 1990"; Zeitspanne: "for 19 years")

Today nothing much happened, it was very borring. I am thinking about moving to Graz, it would be better for me and my family.

In Graz there are many jobs, and a lot of my relatives are there.

Now, I want to introduce myself:

I wear glasses, my height is 180 cm, and my weight is 75 kg.
I have a daughter, her name is Helin (it's a Kurdish name, it means "home"), she is one year and 4 months old.
My wife's name is Serpil, she is 5 years younger than me. She has been in Austria for 3 years. When she came here, she attended a Germany course by Wifi. Now she is learning for the driver licence for B.

This is enough for today, I thank you again for your effort.

Bye

Hi faruk,
nice letter and nice little family. I hope, my corrections are useful. If there should be anything you don't understand, please ask. And check the grammar explanations and the exercises here on englisch-hilfen. You'll see, your English will improve a lot if you set your mind to it.

Best wishes
Duckduck

[faruk84]

Hi Duckduck,

yes your corrections are very useful.

This is my little world(wife and daughter)

Today I went to a course by the job market, Ams, we learned about how to react of opposite of a chief.

It was boring for me, because I knew all this things.

In the mean time I had very big hunger, I thought about home and the dinner.

bye

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hi Duckduck,

yes, your corrections are very useful.

This is my little world (wife and daughter).

Today I went to a course at the job market, Ams, we learned about how to behave in front of a potential new boss.

It was boring for me, because I knew all these things.

On top of that, I was very hungry and thought about home and dinner.

Bye

Hi faruk,
come on, keep writing, don't give up so soon!!!

You could explain what "Ams" is or describe the jobs you had before or tell us about your little daughter...

Bye
Duckduck

[faruk84]

Hi,

today it was the last day of my course at the Ams. We had learned about (Arbeitnehmerveranlagung[Lohnsteurausgleich]), it was very interesting, because I had learned new things, e.g: how to get more money from the finance authority. She told us that many citizens don´t know about these things.

At 2 o´clock my wife, my daughter and I went to shopping. We had bought new toys and a new coat for my little sweet girl, Helin. She was very happy if she was in the shop,and she wanted to get everything, it was like in heaven of toys for her.All the things had cost 5o Euro.It was a snap for me:))

Now it is 9 pm, and my wife is still learning for the licence.She don´t understand the questions.I have to explain her a lot, it is exhausting, but she is on the way to be a professional.

Duckduck yesterday I was tired, and I wrote less.But today it could be a novel.

I want to thank you, that you courage me to write more.Thanks again.

Bye

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hi,

today it was the last day of my course at the Ams. We had learned about the annual adjustment of income tax. It was very interesting, because I had learned new things, e.g: how to get more money from the tax office. The teacher/lecturer told us that many citizens don't know about these things.

At 2 o'clock my wife, my daughter and I went to shopping. We had bought new toys and a new coat for my little sweet girl, Helin. She was very happy when she was in the shop, and she wanted to get everything. It was like being in a heaven of toys for her. We spent about 50 Euros. It was a bargain for me:))

Now it is 9 pm, and my wife is still learning for the licence. She doesn't understand the questions. I have to explain her a lot, it is exhausting, but she is on the way to become a professional.

Duckduck, yesterday I was tired, and I wrote less. But today it could be a novel.

I want to thank you, that you encourage me to write more. Thanks again.

Bye

Best wishes
Duckduck

[faruk84]

Hi Duckduck,

how are you today? Please tell me something about you.

I wanna know who you are, and why you do something like this(correcting letters)

Do you know, I learn Spanish. Can you also speak Spanish?

It is very interesting.Hola!!!!

The language sounds very good. If I ´d like to learn something, I do it always myself.

For example: I can juggle. I saw it in Tv and then I said to myself, wow, Faruk why you don´t learn it.
And since then I can juggle. And now, learning Spanish is the next one.

First I learn the alphabet, how to spell it. Then I learn the time, the colours, the numbers....
I don´t go to a course to learn a new language.

Good evening.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo faruk!

Bitte lies einmal Deine privaten Nachrichten, dazu gehst Du auf Persönlicher Bereich (oben auf der Seite), wählst dann private Nachrichten und öffnest sie unter Posteingang. Danke!

Grüße
Duckduck