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[SaKaEng]

Hallo hab hier mal wieder was...

Summary

Young people get a chance

The central focus of this article is about training schemes in the company of Sir John Arlington.
The primary object is to offer high standards and quality products for their costumers by committed and effective management.
The company doesn’t just offer well paid and interesting jobs apart from this they work together with local school and colleges to provide career information.
In the majority of cases management trainees are graduates and young people with A-level although they have good experiences with 16 year old people who come through Youth training scheme or their own Retail Training schemes.
Trainees are supposed to identify themself with the company of Sir John Arlington and the way how they achieve it is to put all trainees together and concentrate of regular discussion with upper management and practise of personal skills to make the training programme work.




und hier sind die Sätze

1. Francoise has stayed with a penfriend in Bristol when she was in England the first time.
2. Jake likes to learn about people and he also likes to meet them and talk to them.
3. You have to make the first move yourself. Just talk about the weather. They open up alright if you go about it in a right way.
4. Esteban is a type students who is waiting and seeing about what will happen. He doesn’t believe in planning an holiday and he hasn’t got a list or even a map.
5. Esteban has never been before in England.
6. They are thinking after working on a plant fruit trees you don’t want strawberries anymore.
7. It is a book with addresses of cheaper accommodation away from the centre above all bed and breakfast.
8. Esteban believes hitchhiking is the best way to meet new people. He is of opinion that it is very fascinating that sometimes a drivers picks him up and telling him all the secrets, personal troubles and sometimes the story of their lifes. That’s way Esteban is very fascinating in hitchhiking.
9. The police don’t like it and they are moving you on.
10. He suggested that they are going all to victorias station and he will make a party then.

3.

1. In my holidays I’m interested in sightseeing and relaxing and by they way I really
like meeting people and make contact .
2. I like to visit the whole wide world, so I like to visit foreign countries.
3. I think it depends on what kind of holiday it is. If is city trip, you would like to see as much as possible, so you will move around. If it is a package holiday maybe you will have 2 days for culture and sightseeing for that reason you will spend the rest of your holidays for relaxing.
4. Personally, I believe that to book a hotel room is more comfortable and you have got the possibility to adjourn to your room.
5. It also depends on what it costs because there a lot of possibilities to travel. Sometimes there special offers or cut- price offers when I think of flights or travel by train.
6. I would like to go to London because it is a big city and millions of different people. In addition to that I’m dreaming of a rain shower while I’m visiting Trafalgar Square.
7. I never have been in the United Kingdom before.
8. The United Kingdom consists of England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland.
9. English is a mixture of several languages. The English language contains a lot of words from the French, Latin and German.
10. Cardiff is the capital of Wales and it is located in the south – west of Wales.

[SaKaEng]

Hey das ging schnell...ich wollte mich doch noch bedanken bei euch Knutscha

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo SaKaEng!

Hier ist es schwierig zu korrigieren, weil bei den Sätzen gar nicht klar ist, was da passieren soll. Sind es Übersetzungen, oder ist ein Wort eingesetzt oder sind es Antworten auf Fragen?

Schreib das bitte eben noch dabei, damit wir wissen, was festgelegt ist und was von Dir stammt und demnach verändert werden kann, OK?

Ach übrigens, wenn Du Dich mal vertippst oder merkst, dass Du was vergessen hast, nachdem Du den post abgesendet hast, kannst Du ihn noch einige Minuten lang verändern, in dem Du ihn sozusagen "zurückholst". Dazu drückst Du rechts oben auf Ändern und schon geht's los. Dann brauchst Du nicht immer einen neuen post zu senden.

[SaKaEng]

Die Sätze sind Antworten auf Fragen zum Teil zu einem Text und zum Teil allgemeine Fragen.
Das Summary ist von einem Zeitungsartikel.

Ich danke euch