huhu...englisch Legastheniker benötigt wieder korrekturhilf

[clemenz86]

Das Thema ist einfach Globalisierung..meine große Schwäche, die Grammatik. ich hoffe, dass jemand den Text lesen und bei Bedarf korrigieren kann.

Globalization

The definition of globalization is a difficult one.
It means on the one hand for example the outsourcing of jobs in countries where it is able to produce for less costs.
On the other hand it means to buy products for cheap prices. Moreover, it is standing for policy issues which exceed country frontiers for example the distribution of resources such water and oil.
Positive and negative points should be at balance, that requires a responsible behavior of ( by ) nations. Especially, countries with policy power like the USA and China used to be faced with it.
Globalization is an economically-advantageous for nations which make profit by it. It is a typical character of capitalism. Nokia, a Swedish mobile phone producer outsourced its company from Germany to Romania due to cheap conditions. German employees became out of work despite of massive protest. Nevertheless, there are also positive views e.g. for consumer in Germany who purchase rice or textiles from poor nations like Indonesia or Thailand.

[clemenz86]

Hab ich was falsch gemacht, dass keiner sich trauen will ?

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Das Thema ist einfach Globalisierung..meine große Schwäche, die Grammatik. Ich hoffe, dass jemand den Text lesen und bei Bedarf korrigieren kann.

Klar können wir! Machen wir auch gerne, bloß manchmal etwas verzögert.
Auf geht's!


Globalization

Globalization is not easy to define.
On the one hand, it means the outsourcing of jobs to countries where production is cheaper.
On the other hand, it means buying products for low prices. Moreover, it stands for policy issues which cross country frontiers for example the distribution of resources such as water and oil or environment protection.
Positive and negative side effects should balance each other for all countries.
This requires responsible behavior, especially of those countries with an immense political and economical power like the USA and China.
Globalization is an economically advantageous for nations which make high profits by it. It is a typical phenomenon of capitalism and as such seldom concerns itself with social hardships and injustice, but is ruled purely by economic considerations. Nokia, a Swedish mobile phone producer, outsourced its company from Germany to Romania because of "better" production conditions. German employees were laid off despite massive protests and despite the fact that Nokia had been heavily subsidised by the German government. Nevertheless, there are also positive effects of globalization, e.g. for consumers in Germany, who purchase rice or clothes from poor countries like Indonesia or Thailand.

Habe meine Vorschläge grün markiert. Du hast hier ein paar mal die amerikanische Schreibweise gewählt, ist das beabsichtigt? Sonst noch mal nachschauen "globalization, behavior" und "subsidise" u.a. anpassen, ich spreche und schreibe ja nun mal BrE.

Grüße von
Duckduck

[clemenz86]

Zunächst mal Danke und nein es war keine Absicht.