Correction, please :P

[Joline]

It would be great if someone can mark my mistakes!

About a Boy
A letter to Will, five years after ending the book, by Marcus
Dear Will,
We didn’t hear about each other a long time. So I have to tell you the latest news.
You can not believe what happened last week. I met Ellie in the city. At first I was not able to identify Ellie. She is so pretty, no black clothes and her nature hair colour, dark brown.
A man was with her, he was ample. He was wearing a suit and very nice black shoes. He went hand in hand with Ellie. They looked both very happy.
She can’t identify me, but I’m not surprised. I became older, I’m not as bad dressed as 5 years ago and I have a nice haircut. So I’m another person, than she knows me. I must say, that it makes me happy to know that Ellie is all right. Her youth was hard and then it is nice to see that she lives a normal life.
Oh know I talked enough about my old friend. How is it with you and your wife? I hope very well.
Will, can you say me when Mary’s‘christening is. If I shall become the godfather I have to be there! You have to answer very fast, because I plan to spend my last school year in Australia and so I have to know when I have to visit my family and friends.
My mom has a new boyfriend since 5 month. I didn’t say something about it earlier, because I wanted to check out if it is abiding. His name is Paul, he is very nice. But you will meet him, by the next time I visit you and you entire family. You will see he is the best man my mom ever had.
So that’s it for the first. Send nice greetings to your family. If you have enough time call me please.
Love Marcus

[Keswick (Contributor)]

It would be great if someone could mark my mistakes!

About a Boy
A letter to Will, five years after ending the book, by Marcus

Dear Will,
We haven't heard from each other a long time. So I have to tell you the latest news.
You would not believe what happened last week. I met Ellie in the city. At first I did not recognise Ellie. She is so pretty, no black clothes and she now has her natural hair colour, dark brown.
A man was with her, he was ample (he was what??). He was wearing a suit and very nice black shoes. He held hands with Ellie. They both looked very happy.
She did not recognise me, but I’m not surprised. I became older, I’m not as badly dressed as I was 5 years ago and I have a nice haircut. So I’m a different person, to how she knew me. I must say, that it makes me happy to know that Ellie is alright. Her youth was hard and then it is nice to see that she lives a normal life.
Oh know I talked enough about my old friend. How is it going with you and your wife? I hope everything goes well.
Will, can you tell me when Mary's christening is. If I shall become the godfather I have to be there! You have to reply very quickly, because I plan to spend my last school year in Australia and so I have to know when I have to visit my family and friends.
My mom has had a new boyfriend for 5 month. I didn’t say something about it earlier, because I wanted to check out if it will last. His name is Paul, he is very nice. But you will meet him, by the next time I visit you and you entire family. You will see he is the best man my mom has ever had.
So that’s it for now. Send my best wishes to your family. If you find the time, call me, please.
Love Marcus

[Joline]

thank you very much!