Aufsatz mit der Bitte um Korrektur

[Rul123]

Hallo zusammen,

ich hatte schon seit einigen Jahren leider nur sehr wenig mit der Englischen Sprache zu tun.

Nun besuche ich wieder die Schule und muss hier einen Aufsatz über Fast Food schreiben.
Könnt ihr ihn bitte mal durchlesen und mit mitteilen, wie ihr ihn findet, und was noch verbessert werden kann?

Vielen Dank!

Viele Grüße



Fast Food meals are simple instant meals or snacks for example.
Often the meals will be precooked by the company which produced them to guarantee a short preparation time.

Fast Food is often sold in snack bars, convenience restaurants or will be brought to your home by delivery services.
The meals are cooked fast. You don’t have to wait long for your meals in convenience restaurants like MC Donald’s.
You can eat most of the Fast Food meals while you are walking or standing, because you don’t need any knives, forks, spoons or dishes.
Typical Fast Food meals are for example:
curry sausages, hot dogs, fish and chips, hamburgers, french fries, pizza or sandwiches.

The gastronomic culture of Fast Food is actually very popular, because in present our life is often hectically and there is sometimes no time for a meal in a traditional restaurant.

Fast Food is also very popular for the young people, because they don’t have to care about any table manners.

Especially in the beginning of Fast Food here in Germany, it was an expression for the “American Way of Life”

Let’s continue with the origin of Fast Food.

There were also similar convenience restaurants in the antiquity.
The people could buy a hot meal in almost every corner of big cities.
Such convenience restaurants were duged out in Pompeji.
For many people, who lived in the cities, these restaurants were the only option to get a hot meal, because flats often had no cooking zone.
The concept of fast food was born in the 1950s in the USA. In the second half of the 20th century fast food came to Europe and is now spreading throughout the world.
Originally there were mainly hamburgers in America, which were seen as typical fast food, because you can eat them while you are walking.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo zusammen,

ich hatte schon seit einigen Jahren leider nur sehr wenig mit der englischen Sprache zu tun.

Nun besuche ich wieder die Schule und muss hier einen Aufsatz über Fast Food schreiben.
Könnt ihr ihn bitte mal durchlesen und mir mitteilen, wie ihr ihn findet, und was noch verbessert werden kann?

Vielen Dank!

Viele Grüße

Willkommen im Forum

Vorausbemerkung: Die Groß- oder Kleinschreibung von Fast Food ist mir ein Rätsel, schau selber noch mal im Internet, oder vielleicht weiß ja auch hier jemand Bescheid...

Simple instant meals or snacks are an example for Fast Food meals.
Often these meals will be precooked by the company which produces them to guarantee a short preparation time.

Fast Food is often sold in snack bars, convenience restaurants or will be brought to your home by delivery services.
The required cooking time is very short. In convenience restaurants like Mc Donald’s you don’t have to wait long for your meals.
You can eat most of the Fast Food meals while you are walking or standing, because you don’t need any knives, forks, spoons or dishes.
Typical Fast Food meals are for example:
curry sausages, hot dogs, fish and chips, hamburgers, French fries, pizza or sandwiches.

The gastronomic culture of Fast Food is actually very popular, because nowadays our life is often hectically and sometimes there is simply no time for a meal in a traditional restaurant.

Fast Food is also very popular with the young people, because they don’t have to bother about any table manners.

Especially in the early years of Fast Food here in Germany, it was an expression for the “American Way of Life”.

Let’s continue with the origins of Fast Food.

Even in ancient times there were similar convenience restaurants.
The People could buy a hot meal at almost every corner in big cities.
Such convenience restaurants were duged out in Pompeji.
For many people, who lived in the cities, these restaurants were the only option to get a hot meal, because flats often didn't have a cooking zone.
The concept of Fast Food was born in the 1950s in the USA. In the second half of the 20th century it reached Europe and is now spreading throughout the world.
Originally, the Americans considered the hamburger as the typical Fast Food, because you can eat it while you are walking.

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Grüße
Duckduck