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Kleiner Text, der wissen moechte was fuer Fehler er hat

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Bert is one of my best friends who I have now. I would not say that he is my very best friend but one of them. Usually, I do something with him on weekends. Often, I ask him and not he me. It seems that he has a talent to organize something. The reason might be that he knows a lot of people.
Bert is the friend who lives the closest to my place. I often meet him in the bus, but not that often since we normally do not arrange to meet. Unfortunately, he is not anymore in my class like he used to be because he failed English in grade 8. If you fail one class in Germany you must repeat the whole grade. I would not say that it was his fault. I still am of the opinion that the teacher did not really like him. But strangely this occurrence caused that we became good friends. Before we had not been the best friends and we had not done something after school. Of course that at this time he moved to my district in my city was another reasons as well.
Finally I would say that I will probably never forget him even when I am 80 years old. He will have ever been one of my best friends in my childhood.

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Of course that at this time he moved to my district in my city was another reasons as well.

I’d day: another reason (not another reasons)
Und vielleicht: Respectfullly yours

Schönen Tag
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Re: Kleiner Text, der wissen moechte was fuer Fehler er hat

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Awesome hat geschrieben:Bert is currently one of my best friends who I have now. I would not say that he is my very best friend but one of them. Usually, I do something with him on weekends. Often, I ask him (ask him for what?) and he does not ask me. It seems that he has a talent to organize things. The reason might be that he knows a lot of people.
Bert is the friend who lives the closest to my place. I often meet him in the bus, but not that often since we normally do not arrange to meet. Unfortunately, he is not in my class anymore like he used to be because he failed English in grade 8. If you fail a class in Germany you must repeat the whole grade. I would not say that it was his fault. I still stick to my opinion that the teacher did not really like him. But strangely enough this occurrence caused that we became good friends. Before we had not been the best friends and we had not done anything after school. Of course the fact that during this time he moved to my district in my city was another reasons as well.
Finally I would say that I will probably never forget him even when I am 80 years old. He will always have been one of my best childhood friends.