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corporal punishment - eine schnelle korrektur wäre super =)

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Corporal punishment

Corporal punishment has been a part of family life for thousands of years, taking its place in societies all over the world. From wood switches to thick leather belts, all sorts of tools have been used to discipline naughty children. It is a very controversial topic that is being discussed amongst educators across the world. Is this form of punishment justifiable or is it counterproductive for children’s growing up?

A physical form of punishment might not only produce physical but also mental pain. It can lower the childrens’ self esteem or might even contribute to violent behaviour. Furthermore, the child will be afraid that the adult will hurt it again. In some cases, corporal punishment psychologically affects one’s mind on for the whole life. As a result, parents should try to raise up their children without violence to avoid the risk of damaging them mentally. Further fear of pain has no place in the process of growing up. If you are carefully trying to show pupils how to behave right you will not need to hurt them.

Mostly corporal punishment is used because it is quick and in most cases effective for a moment. The child behaves bad and gets a quick slap in the face. But as quick as the pain disappears, the child will have forgotten why it had been punished. In addition, using corporal punishment shows a lack of moral strength. Hence, parents should try to explain to their children what they have done wrong in an extensive and also empathetic way.

Some people argue that parents should have the right to decide own their own how to bring up their children. It has been suggested that parents should be allowed to select the type of education that they consider appropriate for their children. Unfortunately, some parents don’t know another way to punish their children than beating them. They have been brought up with violence during their own childhood. Often, the family has conformed to a pattern in which the line of family violence started generations ago. It’s hard for the parents to get out of this vicious circle.

On the whole, I think parents should use a non-physical way of punishment to educate their children. There are many more effective ways to treat bad behaviour than by physical punishment and I think that we should look at these ways more carefully and consider them as an alternative to corporal punishment.


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Delfino

Re: corporal punishment - eine schnelle korrektur wäre super =)

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airam11 hat geschrieben:Corporal punishment

Corporal punishment has been a part of family life for thousands of years, taking its place in societies all over the world.
All sorts of tools from wooden sticks to thick leather belts have been used to discipline naughty children.
It is a very controversial topic that is being discussed amongst educators across the world.
Can this form of punishment be justified or is it always counterproductive for the development
of the growing up child?

A physical form of punishment might not only result in physical but also mental pain. It can thereby lower
the children's self esteem or might even contribute to violent behaviour. Furthermore, the child will be afraid
of the adult who might hurt it again. ( This fear is supposed to prevent the same behaviour in the future! )
In some cases corporal punishment has a unpredictable psychological effect on one’s mind for the whole life.
Therefore parents should try to raise their children without violence to avoid the risk of mental injury.
Adults can try to reduce the need of punishment when they carefully show pupils how to behave correctly.
Because the fear of pain is not a good foundation for the education of growing up children.

Corporal punishment is mostly used because it is very quick and in most cases an effective way
to demonstrate the superior power of the punishing one
. The child behaves badly and gets a quick slap in the face.
But as quick as the pain disappears, the child will have forgotten why it had been punished. In addition,
using corporal punishment shows a lack of moral strength. Hence, parents should always try to explain to their children
what they have done wrong in an extensive and also empathetic way.

Some people argue that parents should have the right to decide on their own how to bring up their children.
It has been suggested that parents should be allowed to select the type of education that they consider appropriate
for their children. Unfortunately, some parents don’t know any other way to punish their children than to beat them
which is commonly a result of violence during their own childhood. This form of violence started often many generations ago
and formed a patter which is traditionally repeated. So
it is hard for the parents to get out of this vicious circle.

I think, in the end, parents should use a non-physical way of punishment to educate their children.
There are many more effective ways than physical punishment to treat bad behaviour.
We should look for these ways more carefully and consider them as an alternative to corporal punishment.

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: corporal punishment - eine schnelle korrektur wäre super =)

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Delfino hat geschrieben:
airam11 hat geschrieben:Corporal punishment

Corporal punishment has been a part of family life for thousands of years - occurring in societies all over the world.
All sorts of tools from wooden sticks to thick leather belts have been used to discipline naughty children.
It is a very controversial topic that is being discussed amongst educators across the world.
Can this form of punishment be justified or is it always counterproductive for the development
of the growing up child?

A physical form of punishment might not only result in physical but also mental pain. It can thereby lower
the children's self esteem or might even contribute to violent behaviour. Furthermore, the child will be afraid
of the adult who might hurt it again. ( This fear is supposed to prevent the same behaviour in the future! )
In some cases corporal punishment can have an unpredictable psychological effect on the mind for the rest of one's life.
Therefore, parents should try to raise their children without violence to avoid the risk of mental injury.
Adults can try to reduce the need of punishment when they carefully show pupils how to behave correctly.
Because the fear of pain is not a good foundation for the education of growing up children.

Corporal punishment is mostly used because it is very quick and in most cases an effective way
to demonstrate the superior power of the punishing
person/party. The child behaves badly and gets a quick slap in the face.
But as soon as the pain has disappeared, the child will have forgotten why it had been punished in the first place. In addition,
using corporal punishment shows a lack of moral strength. Hence, parents should always try to explain to their children
what they have done wrong in an extensive and also empathetic way.

Some people argue that parents should have the right to decide on their own how to bring up their children.
It has been suggested that parents should be allowed to select the type of education that they consider appropriate
for their children. Unfortunately, some parents can't think of any other way to punish their children than to beat them. This which is commonly a result of violence during their own childhood. This form of violence often started many generations ago
and formed a pattern which is traditionally repeated. So
it is hard for the parents to get out of this vicious circle.

I think, in the end, parents should use a non-physical way of punishment to educate their children.
There are many more effective ways than physical punishment to treat bad behaviour.
We should look for these ways more carefully and consider them as an alternative to corporal punishment.
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Beste Grüße
Duckduck

Delfino

Re: corporal punishment - eine schnelle korrektur wäre super =)

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Duckduck hat geschrieben:Doch noch der ein oder andere Vorschlag meinerseits...
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