Kleiner Text - Bitte um Korrektur

[hello]

Hallo,

ich habe mal einen kleinen englischen Text fertiggemacht, wo es um "meine Digitalkamera" gehen soll...Ist der Text so in Ordnung, oder muss ich noch was ändern. Vielen Dank für Hilfe!

The name of my digital camera is *****. The price was *** €. My favorite motives are friends, but also the nature. My camera is about one year old. It has 8 megapixels and makes very good pictures and movies. I am very satisfied with it. I bought it in an electronics store. The handling is unfortunately somewhat difficult. The battery is also not good. I use my digital camera about two times a week. I would like to see a touch screen for my digital camera. At Christmas I want a new digital camera, because the memory card reader is faulty. My new digital camera I'll test during the Christmas holidays in the mountains.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo,

Hello, hello, and welcome to the forum!

ich habe mal einen kleinen englischen Text fertiggemacht, wo es um "meine Digitalkamera" gehen soll...Ist der Text so in Ordnung, oder muss ich noch was ändern. Vielen Dank für Eure Hilfe!

The name of my digital camera is *****. The price was *** €. My favorite motives are friends, but also the nature. My camera is about one year old. It has 8 megapixels and produces very good pictures and movies. I am very satisfied with it. I bought it in an electronics store. Unfortunately, the handling is somewhat difficult. The battery is not good either. I use my digital camera about twice a week. I would like to see ??? was meinst Du da? a touch screen for my digital camera. I would like (Du willst doch den Weihnachtsmann nicht verärgern, nicht? hihihi) a new digital camera for Christmas, because the memory card reader is faulty. And I'll test my new digital camera during the Christmas holidays in the mountains.

Viel Spass damit und - guter Text!

Good luck says
Duckduck

[Delfino]

Hallo,

ich habe einmal einen kleinen englischen Text geschrieben in dem es um "meine Digitalkamera" geht.
Ist der Text so in Ordnung, oder muss ich noch etwas ändern?
Vielen Dank für Eure Hilfe!

The model of my digital camera is *****. The price was *** €. I bought it at a local / an online electronics store.
My camera is about one year old. Its digital sensor has a maximal resolution of 8 megapixels and produces very good pictures and movies.
I am very satisfied with its picture quality. So I use my digital camera at least twice a week. My favorite motives are friends, but also nature.
Unfortunately, he battery does not last very long and the handling is somewhat difficult.
Therefore I would prefer to have a digital camera with a touch screen.
I hope to get a new digital camera for Christmas, because the memory card reader of the current one is faulty too.
I'd very happy to test my new digital camera during the Christmas holidays in the mountains.

Most older models are not SD-HC compatible which limites the maximal usable memeory card capacity to 4 GB.
So the integrated card reader may work well within the limits of its original specification.

[hello]

Hallo,

vielen Dank euch beiden.

Also wo es um den Touchscreen geht, war eben die Aufgabe, was wir an unsere DIgitalkamera verbesseren würden bzw. wünschen.

Mhmm...ich möchte Englisch auch endlich beherschen können. Jetzt hatte ich schon mehr als 7 Jahren Englisch in der Schule / Berufsschule und kann es immer noch nicht richtig Englisch.

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Vielen Dank nochmal!