Gibt es verbesserungsvorschläge???

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taktloss34

Gibt es verbesserungsvorschläge???

Beitrag von taktloss34 »

My job as a Dj

It´s possible to exercise this job without any education. But you an proctising it by learning and with special courses.

If get the chance to perform, you have to spend many hours, money and a tecknical know-how in your career.

To expand your own knowledge, you can study at the Vibra School of Djing.

Now a days it´s very hard because the number of business verals are very high. Everyone wants to perform in the best clubs.

The most popular style of music is house, techno an blackmusic

The salary in this job depends on the dj, his/her skills. And the club. Famous Dj´s get a high time rate between 50€ and 250€ per how.

This job is unusally male-dominated.

The focus of the work is tochoose every night the right music. In the older days the dj´s took flights to the united states of america to pick some good music at thelocal flea markets. Now a days, they search for discoveries in the internet for example „Ebay“ or otherwise some special forums.

My own opinion to this job

In my opinon is the job as a dj a very popular and interesting activity. He is famous like a star when be performs on stage. But I think that it´s very hard to handle your businen, because you get a lot of rivals. When I read the book a „ Dj Ambition“ I recognize the hard competition in this job. But the more thought of the money coulst change my mind to ecercise this job.
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Wenn jemand Fehler entdeckt,wäre es cool,wenn Er/Sie verbesserungsvorschläge schreiben!!!
vielen Dank im vorraus!!!
mfg
takti

joy

Re: Gibt es verbesserungsvorschläge???

Beitrag von joy »

Hi takti
Hier ist ein Verbesserungsvorschlag. Ich hoffe, dass es dir hilft. Leider kann ich hier nicht formatieren, so dass du meine Aenderungen besser erkennen könntest.


My job as a DJ

It´s possible to do this job without any education. But you can practise it through learning by doing and attending special courses.

If you have the chance of getting the job, you have to spend many hours and money. Of course a technical know-how is needed too in your career.

To expand your own knowledge, you can study at the Vibra School of DJing.

Nowadays it’s very hard because the number of business verals? are very high. Everyone wants to perform in the best clubs.

The most popular style of music is house, techno and black music.

The salary in this job depends on the DJ, his/her skills, and the club. Famous DJ´s get a high time rate between 50€ and 250€ per how.?

This job is unusually male-dominated.

The focus of the work is to choose every night the right music. In the older days the DJ´s took flights to the United States of America to pick some good music at the local flea markets. Nowadays, they search for discoveries in the internet for example „Ebay“ or otherwise some special forums.

My own opinion to this job

In my opinion the job as a DJ is a very popular and interesting activity. He is famous like a star when performing on stage. But I think that it´s very hard to handle your businen? business?, because you get a lot of rivals. When I read the book „ DJ Ambition“ I recognize the hard competition in this job. But the mere thought of the money could change my mind to do this job.
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Liebe Grüsse
joy

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: Gibt es verbesserungsvorschläge???

Beitrag von Duckduck (Contributor) »

Tach zusammen :) !
Ich erlaube mir, liebe joy, noch mal drüber zu gucken, OK? :wink1:

If you have the chance of getting the job, you have to spend many hours and money. Of course a technical know-how is needed in your career as well.
Nowadays it’s very hard because the number of business rivals is very high.
.
The most popular styles of music are house, techno and black music.
.
Famous DJs get an hourly rate of between 50€ and 250€.
The focus of the work is to choose the right music every night. Some years ago the DJs flew to the United States of America to pick up some good music at the local flea markets. Nowadays, they search for discoveries on the internet, for example "Ebay" or otherwise some special forums
.
My own opinion about this job
But I think that it's very hard to handle business, because you get a lot of rivals. When I read the book "DJ Ambition" I realized how hard the competition in this job is. But the mere thought of the money changed my mind to do this job
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Liebe joy, ich hoffe, es ist Dir Recht, dass ich nochmal "nach-nachgeschaut" habe. Du hast eine sehr gute Korrektur gemacht, das möchte ich Dir gerne sagen. Und takti, Dein Text ist ganz OK, aber bitte achte auf Rechtschreibung und guck noch ein wenig in Grammatikbücher, OK?

Liebe Grüße
und schönen 3. Advent
Duckduck :santa:

joy

Re: Gibt es verbesserungsvorschläge???

Beitrag von joy »

ja Duckduck, noch so gerne - danke für die Korrektur.

Ebenfalls schönen 3. Advent
joy

Delfino

Re: Gibt es verbesserungsvorschläge???

Beitrag von Delfino »

OASN

As a good DJ you should also have at least basic knowledge of the legal implications of your work.

The music you use during your public performances as a DJ needs to be properly licenced.
You may remember the fineprint on every normal DVD/CD/LP cover. Not for public performance.
Unauthorized Public Performance Prohibited!

A public performance occurs whenever sound recordings are played outside the domestic or family circle. Whenever,
a sound recording is played in a commercial environment, even if only one person can hear it, it becomes a public performance
and a fee is payable.

When you buy a DVD/CD/LP it only gives you the right to use it for private use such as playing at home or in your car.
If you wish to use it in a commercial environment, such as background music in a shop or during a public event
you require a licence from the rights owner which in this case is PPL in the UK, CASH in Hong Kong or GEMA in Germany.

Copyright subsists in musical work (melody) and literary work (lyrics) as well as sound recordings such as CDs.
Therefore you need to have proper licences for both.