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Gast123

kleiner Text zum korrigieren ;)

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Hallo,ich bin in Englisch noch recht unsicher und da mein Vokabular nicht wirklich ausreichend ist musste ich dict.cc benuzten.
Ich bitte euch nun diesen Text Korrektur zu lesen :wink:

Environment protection-the parts and the problems

The mainly parts of Enviroment protection are climate protection,forest protection and water polution control.Actually the "Enviromentprotecter" discussed about air contamination and climate warming.

Climate protection

The destination of climate protection is to operate against the human global warming and to reduce their efffect. The mainly parts of climate protaction are the reduction of greenhouse gases and the saving of ozean and forests. These tape the greenhouse gas Kohlenstoffdioxid up. The climate protection is strong connected with forest protection an water polution control.

Forest protection

The forest protection inclused all provisions to save the forests from every form of damage. In the procress will considered all aspects of the forest . At that stand the protection against deleterious animals,mushrooms and plants or environmental influences in the foreground. Further is the forest protection a important factar against wood clearing.

Water polution control

As water polution termed the totality of trys to save the water from adverse effects.
The water polution control has various purposes:

* The pollution clean of water from drinking water or closure.

* Protection of water dependant ecosystems.


Envirmoment problems

Envirmoment problems are from humans generate changes in the enviroment.They affect negativ of the current or future existent of humans.

Human actions manipulate the enviroment. It give beside the wilfully upgrades
averse effects,too. sooner was the enviroment manipulatioan and their results local. Were the effects problematica,so the humans pulled.Today the situation have changed.The negative results are obvious and move on aren't possible.

vielen Dank schonmal im Vorraus.

freundliche Grüße

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: kleiner Text zum korrigieren ;)

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Gast123 hat geschrieben:Hallo, ich bin im Englischen noch recht unsicher, und da mein Vokabular nicht wirklich ausreichend ist, musste ich dict.cc benutzen.
Ich bitte Euch nun, diesen Text Korrektur zu lesen :wink:

Environment protection - the main constituents and the problems

The main constituents of environment protection are climate protection, forest protection and water pollution control. Actually the environmentalist discussed about air contamination and climate warming. (Was meinst Du hier??)

Climate protection

The aim of climate protection is to work against the human global warming caused by mankind and to reduce its efffects. The main goals of climate protection are the reduction of greenhouse gases and the saving of oceans and forests which are important, because they help convert the greenhouse gas carbon dioxide. Thus, the climate protection is strongly connected with forest protection and water pollution control.

Forest protection

The Forest protection includes all provisions to save the forests from every form of damage. In this procress all aspects of the forest are considered. Special attention is paid to the protection against harmful animals, mushrooms and plants or other environmental influences. Another important aim of forest protection is the reduction of wood clearing.

Water pollution control

Water pollution control means the totality of attempts to save the water from adverse effects.
It has various purposes:

* The pollution clean of water from drinking water or closure. Das verstehe ich leider nicht

* Protection of water dependant ecosystems.


Envirmoment problems

Envirmonment problems are defined as changes in the enviroment which were caused by man. They have a negative effect on both the present and future existence of mankind.

Human actions manipulate the enviroment. Unfortunately, there tend to be averse effects besides the desired improvements.
In former times the manipulatioan of the enviroment - and thus its results - were localized. Whenever the effects turned problematic, the people would leave the area and settle somewhere else. Today we face an altogether different situation. The negative results are obvious and can't be denied and we can't move away from them.

vielen Dank schon einmal im Vorraus.

Hi and welcome!

Puuh, der Text ist völlig OK - inhaltlich. Aber an der Grammatik, Sprache und Rechtschreibung musst Du noch viel arbeiten. Aber das weißt Du selber, nicht? :)

Bitte beachte, dass in diesem Forum auch Ausländer Deutsch lernen möchten, also Augen auf im Schriftverkehr!!! :lol:

Good luck says
Duckduck

Gast123

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Hallo, leider habe ich im Stress der letzten Wochen völlig vergessen mich zu bedanken.Dies will ich jetzt nachholen:
Vielen Dank für die tolle Hilfe!

Ich wünsch euch einen gute Rutsch in das neue Jahr ;)

mfg Gast123

Duckduck (Contributor)

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Oh wie nett! Da freue ich mich und wir alle freuen uns, denn wenn man sich Mühe beim Helfen gibt, ist es der schönste "Lohn", wenn das hinterher anerkannt wird.

Auch Dir einen guten Rutsch und viel Freude und Erfolg im neuen Jahr!

Das
wünscht
Duckduck :prost: