Text über Lloret de Mar

[Washburn.]

Hallo! Wir mussten Zuhause einen Text über unsere Traumferien mit 1'000.- schreiben. Den Text müssen wir anschliessend in der Schule vortragen, daher wäre ich echt froh, wenn ihr ihn kurz durchlesen könntet und Rechtschreib- und Logikfehler verbessern könnt.

I would pass my dream holidays with 1'000 francs in the Spanish city Lloret de Mar, with a group of other young people. First I would choose a hotel which is near the beach and which isn’t too expensive for a young guy. I found a quite good hotel called “Copacabana”. It costs 300.- francs for six nights and it’s a three stars hotel. The flight to the airport together with the return flight would be about 320.- francs.
I would get up every day very late, so that I’m well-rested and could start the day calmly. I think I would relax every day on the beach. Just lying there in the sun and do nothing. And if it was to hot, I would go into the blue sea to cool me.
But I think only lying on the beach is a little bit boring. Lloret de Mar is famous for a lot of teenagers, which spend their summer holidays there. I guess, it wouldn’t be hard to find a group, which plays beachsoccer, beachvolleyball or something like this.
It’s also offered a lot of leisure activities and small travels inside of the surrounding area by native people. Definitely I would go to Barcelona, the never sleeping city of Spain. I guess I would go to view a soccer match in the “Camp Nou”, the biggest stadion of Europe. But with 60.- francs per ticket it’s quite expensive. And maybe if I had desire and enough money, I would bring myself to visit the picasso museum, one of the most famous museums of the world.
On another day I would sail with a catamaran along the “Costa Brava” for about 40.- francs. The end of the line is on a little bay, where you do snorkelling and watersliding.
It’s also offered a lot of other activities like bungee jumping, skyriding and safari, but I have to distribute my money wisely.

And of course I would allow me every day the food specialities of Lloret de Mar. For example “conill amb cargols”. I guess the most of you don’t know what this is. I promise you would like it. It’s rabbit with snails. Or another speciality is called “pollaste amb llagosta”. That’s chicken with crawfish.

But why I would exactly go to Lloret de Mar? The reason is easy. It’s the biggest party city around there. Teenagers from all over the world meet theirself there and do the biggest summerparties from Europe.

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hallo! Wir mussten Zuhause einen Text über unsere Traumferien mit 1'000.- schreiben. Den Text müssen wir anschliessend in der Schule vortragen, daher wäre ich echt froh, wenn ihr ihn kurz durchlesen könntet und Rechtschreib- und Logikfehler verbessern könnt.

I would spend my dream holidays with 1'000 francs in the Spanish city Lloret de Mar, with a group of other young people. First I would choose a hotel which is near the beach and which isn’t too expensive for a young guy. I found a quite good hotel called “Copacabana”. It costs 300.- francs for six nights and it’s a three stars hotel. The flight to the airport plus the return flight (Du koenntest hier auch nur the return flight schreiben, denn das umfasst beiden Fluege, sonst waeres es ein "one-way flight") would be about 320.- francs.
I would get up late every day very, so that I’m well-rested and could start the day calmly. I think I would relax on the beach every day. Just lying there in the sun and do nothing. And if it was too hot, I would go into the blue sea to cool me down.
But I think only lying on the beach is a little bit boring. Lloret de Mar is famous for a lot of teenagers, who spend their summer holidays there. I guess it wouldn’t be hard to find a group, which plays beach soccer, beach volleyball or something like this.
It The place also offers a lot of leisure activities and small trip lead by natives to the surrounding areas. I would definitely go to Barcelona, the never sleeping city of Spain. I guess I would go to watch a soccer match in the “Camp Nou”, the biggest stadion of Europe. But with 60.- francs per ticket it’s quite expensive. And maybe if I had the desire and enough money, I would bring myself to visit the Picasso museum, one of the most famous museums in the world.
On another day I would sail along the “Costa Brava” with a catamaran for about 40.- francs. The end of the coast is on a little bay, where you can do snorkelling and water sliding.
It The locationalso offers a lot of other activities like bungee jumping, sky riding and safari, but I have to spend my money wisely.

And of course I would allow myself the food specialities of Lloret de Mar every day. For example “conill amb cargols”. I guess the most of you don’t know what this is. I promise you would like it. It’s rabbit with snails. Or another speciality is called “pollaste amb llagosta”. That’s chicken with crawfish.

But why exactely I would go to Lloret de Mar? The reason is easy. It’s the biggest party city around there. Teenagers from all over the world meet each other there and do the biggest summer parties in Europe.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

It/The place also offers a lot of leisure activities and small trip lead by natives to the surrounding areas.

Hallo zusammen
ich meine, es müsste hier heißen:
"...and small trips led by natives..."

Schöner Text, schöne Korrektur, schöner Ferien...

Grüße
Duckduck

[Keswick (Contributor)]

So ist es Duckduck, muss im Plural stehen. Danke!

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Alles klar,
mir ging es aber fast noch mehr um das Past Participle: lead, led, led.

Grüße
Duckduck

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Oh Mensch, ich steh auf dem Schlauch! Sorry! Ja das ist natuerlich auch richtig!