ich schreibe bald eine Englisch Klausur (Klasse 12), haben leider noch nicht richtig summary schreiben geübt, habe jetzt mal eine geschrieben zu der Rede von Arnold Schwarzenegger.
Wäre super wenn es jemand korrekturlesen könnte und mir sagen könnte ob
1. die Zeiten stimmt
2. alles wichtige genannt wurde
3. ob ich zu viel geschrieben habe
4. und ob ich aus der richtigen Sicht geschrieben hab
falls ihr noch andere Fehler/Verbesserungsvorschläge findet, die natürlich auch
My fellow Americans, this is an amazing moment for me. To think that a once scrawny boy from Austria could grow up to become Governor of California and stand in Madison Square Garden to speak on behalf of the President of the United States that is an immigrant's dream. It is the American dream.
As long as I live, I will never forget that day 21 years ago when I raised my hand and took the oath of citizenship.
Do you know how proud I was? I was so proud that I walked around with an American flag around my shoulders all day long.
When I was a boy, the Soviets occupied part of Austria. I saw their tanks in the streets. I saw communism with my own eyes. I remember the fear we had when we had to cross into the Soviet sector. Growing up, we were told, "Don't look the soldiers in the eye. Look straight ahead." It was a common belief that Soviet soldiers could take a man out of his own car and ship him off to the Soviet Union as slave labor.
As a kid I saw the socialist country that Austria became after the Soviets left. I love Austria and I love the Austrian people — but I always knew America was the place for me. In school, when the teacher would talk about America, I would daydream about coming here. I would sit for hours watching American movies transfixed by my heroes like John Wayne. Everything about America seemed so big to me so open, so possible.
Arnold Schwarzeneggers' speech deals with the dream immigrants have when they come to America and how they can achieve them.
When Schwarzenegger came to America he never thought that once he would speak on behalf of the president, he explains that this is an immigrant's dream.
Moreover he explains how produ he was when he got the citizenship.
Besides he explains how he felt when the Soviets occupied part of Austria and how scared people were, since they believed that the soldiers could take a man off to the Soviet Union as a slave labor.
Furthermore Schwarzenegger says how much he loves Austria and the Austrian people, but nevertheless he always knew that America was the right place for him, because it's so open and there are so many possibilitys.
Wäre super wenn mir jemand sagen könnte ob das so richtig wäre, bin mir nämlich ziemlich unsicher aus welcher Sicht etc. ich das schreiben muss.
Vielen Danke schonmal im Voraus