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Magazins

To read magazines is a hobby of al lot teenager. But I don’t read magazines, because I think it’s boring.

It excises 2 kinds of magazines.
The first kind is the Magazine for young people: for example “Girl” or “Bravo”. The contents is always the same: about Stars, a Love Story, psycho tests, a doctor who explain some problems of you, in the Magazine you experienced the newest music. 50 % of these contents isn’t right so I don’t interested in these themes.
The second kind is the specialist journal. Kids, teenager or adults buy specialist journal.
Kids buy for example “Geolino”, teenager buy “Fluter” and adults buy “Die Zeit”.
These are very boring, because it’s like do homework, when you read it.

The most of these Magazines can you buy one time a week Every week pay 3 € (or More): that’s to expensive, I think.

schnip

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Ännchen hat geschrieben:Magazins

Reading magazines is a very common hobby amongst teenagers. I don’t read magazines, because I think it’s boring.

There are two major kind magazines.
The first one often is read by young people: for example “Girl” or “Bravo”. The contents always stays the same. It basicelly deals with Stars, Love Stories, psycho tests and doctors explaining some major problems of youth. These Magazine let you experienced the newest music. 50 % of these contents isn’t right so I don’t interested in these themes(? Erkläre bitte was du meinst?).
The second kind is the specialist journal. Kids, teenagers or adults buy specialist journals.
Kids for example buy “Geolino”, teenagers buy “Fluter” and adults buy “Die Zeit”.
These are very boring, because reading them is like doing homework.

Most of these Magazines come out once a week, with a prize of 3€ per magazine this seems much to expensive for me.
schau einfach durch was ich anders machen würde ;)

Duckduck (Contributor)

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Ännchen hat geschrieben:Magazines

To read magazines is a hobby of al lot teenager. (Siehe schnip) But I don’t read magazines, because I think they are boring.

Basically, there are two kinds of magazines.
The first kind is the magazine for young people: for example “Girl” or “Bravo”. The contents are always the same: information about stars, a love story, psycho tests, a doctor who explains problems which are typical for adolescents. In the magazine you are introduced to the latest music. 50 % of the contents of these magazines are lies so I am not interested in them.
The second kind is the specialist journal. Kids, teenagers or adults buy specialist journals.
Kids buy for example “Geolino”, teenagers buy “Fluter” and adults buy “Die Zeit”.
These are very boring, because reading them is like doing homework.

Most of these magazines you can buy once a week. But to pay 3 € (or more) for them: that’s too expensive, I think.

Beste Grüße
Duckduck :)