Korrektur

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Korrektur

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Der folgende "text" ist ein kurzes Handout, bzw. soll ein kurzes Handout darstellen.
Dennoch denke ich, dass einige fehler vorhanden sind, also vielleicht könntet ihr mal einen Blick drüber werfen :)

Vielen Dank :)


What is Macbeth?
Macbeth is a tragedy written by William Shakespeare in 1606 th

The place where the drama plays:
In Scottland

The most important figures:

Macbeth: At the beginning:brave, courageous,loyal and a skilful commander
Lady macbeth: /
Macduff: He is the Thane of Fife and the counterpart to Macbeth
Banquo: The best friend of Macbeth
Duncan: The king of Sccottland
Malcolm: The elder son of Duncan
Three witches: /

Content:

Macbeth is a succesful commander
Three witches confront him and Banquo on the way home from the battle
They predict that Macbeth will be Thane of Cowdor and king of Scottland
Banquo will beget rulers
Ross (a other Thane) informs Macbeth that he has inherited the title Thane of Cowdor
King Duncan declares his eldest son Malcolm to the next king
Macbeths wife learns of his encounter with the witches and decides to kill the king because she wants that Macbeth will be the next king
Duncan is coming to their castle to stay there the whole night
Macbeth kills the king
Duncans sons flee to England and Ireland; fearing for their own lives
Macbeth is declared king
Macbeth hires two men to murder Banquo
The three witches say that no one of woman borne will harm Macbeth
In England Macduff and Malcolm agree to fight together against Macbeth
Macbeth kills the son and wife of Macduff
The army of Malcolm Macduff and Northumberland (Lords of England) attacks the castle of Macbeth
Macbeth learns that his woman has died by her own hand
Macduff informs Macbeth that he was ripped from his mothers womb and thus not born of woman
Macduff kills Macbeth
Malcolm will be king of Scottland

Duckduck (Contributor)

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Beitrag von Duckduck (Contributor) »

Espanola hat geschrieben:Der folgende Text ist ein kurzes Handout, bzw. soll ein kurzes Handout darstellen.
Dennoch denke ich, dass einige Fehler vorhanden sind, also vielleicht könntet Ihr mal einen Blick drüber werfen :)

Vielen Dank :)


What is "Macbeth"?
"Macbeth" is a tragedy written by William Shakespeare in 1606. th

The scene of the drama:
In Scottland

The most important figures:

Macbeth: At the beginning: brave, courageous, loyal and a skillful commander
Lady Macbeth: /
Macduff: The "Thane of Fife" and Macbeth's counterpart
Banquo: Macbeth's best friend Duncan: The "King of Sccottland"
Malcolm: Duncan's elder son
Three witches: /

Content:

Macbeth is a successful commander.
Three witches confront him and Banquo on the way home from the battle.
They predict that Macbeth will be "Thane of Cowdor" and "King of Scottland".
But Banquo will beget rulers.
Ross (another Thane) informs Macbeth that he has inherited the title "Thane of Cowdor".
King Duncan declares his eldest son Malcolm to next king.
Macbeth's wife learns of his encounter with the witches and decides to kill the king because she wants Macbeth to be the next king.
Duncan comes to their castle to stay there for the night.
Macbeth kills the king.
Duncan's sons flee to England and Ireland; fearing for their own lives.
Macbeth is declared king.
Macbeth hires two men to murder Banquo.
The three witches say that no one of woman borne will harm Macbeth.
In England, Macduff and Malcolm agree to fight against Macbeth together.
Macbeth kills Macduff's son and wife.
The army of Malcolm, Macduff, and Northumberland (Lords of England) attacks the castle of Macbeth.
Macbeth learns that his wife has died by her own hand.
Macduff informs Macbeth that he was ripped from his mother's womb and thus not born of woman.
Macduff kills Macbeth.
Malcolm will be King of Scottland.
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Gruß
Duckduck :)