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Autobiography-Eintrag

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Hey ihr Lieben!
Als Hausaufgabe soll ich einen Autobiography-Eintrag aus der Sicht eines Charakters aus Shakespears Macbeth schreiben.
Wär lieb wenn ihr einen kurzen Blick drüber werfen könntet, also Satzstellung, Rechtschreibung usw...wär wirklich nett! :)


Tens of years ago I lived and worked in Dunsinane, a castle, where I had to take care for my lords wife Lady Macbeth.
I remember that from one day to the next she began to sleepwalk.
My lady behaved in a stressed way since her majesty went away with his army.
A Scottish doctor came to observe Lady Macbeth and he asked me about her fettle.
I told him that Lady Macbeth had often risen from bed and she prepared a letter to be sent.
I refused to tell him about the things, which Lady Macbeth said during her sleepwalk.
I was too scared, because of the
Suddenly, Lady Macbeth entered the room and rubed her hands as if she would wash them.
I told the doctor, that I have seen this action a few times before.
After that, Lady Macbeth began to speak about spots of blood and that she could not wash them away.
She smelled the blood and wondered if her hands would ever be clean.
The doctor seemed to understand the meaning of Lady Macbeth words and he told that there's no way to help her.
He said that she has a sick soul and not a sick body and he assigned me to keep a wary eye on her.

Duckduck (Contributor)

Re: Autobiography-Eintrag

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Heunie hat geschrieben:Hey Ihr Lieben!
Als Hausaufgabe soll ich einen Autobiography-Eintrag aus der Sicht eines Charakters aus Shakespeares "Macbeth" schreiben.
Wäre lieb, wenn Ihr einen kurzen Blick drüber werfen könntet, also Satzstellung, Rechtschreibung usw...wäre wirklich nett! :)


Tens of years ago I lived and worked in Dunsinane, a castle, where I had to take care of (oder wait on, oder look after) my Lord's wife Lady Macbeth.
I remember that suddenly - from one day to the next - she began to sleepwalk.
Milady behaved in a stressed strange fashion ever since His Majesty went away with his army.
A Scottish doctor came to examine Lady Macbeth and he asked me about her fettle.
I told him that Lady Macbeth had often risen from bed and that she had prepared a letter to be sent.
I refused to tell him about the things which Lady Macbeth used to say during her sleepwalking.
I was too scared, because of the ???
Suddenly, Lady Macbeth entered the room and rubbed her hands as if she was washing them.
I told the doctor that I had seen this action a few times before.
After that, Lady Macbeth began to speak about spots of blood and that she could not wash them away.
She smelled the blood and wondered whether her hands would ever be clean again.
The doctor seemed to understand the meaning of Lady Macbeth's words and he told me that there was no way to help her.
He said that she had a sick soul and not a sick body and he assigned me to keep a wary eye on her.
Well done!

Good luck says
Duckduck