Englisch Interview...bitte korrigieren bzw. verbessern

[Water]

Grüße.
Ich habe folgendes Problem: Ich studiere zurzeit Finanzdienstleistungen an einer Uni und muss in knapp einer Woche ein Interview vor der Klasse halten.
Leider hatte ich bisher nur Französisch in der Schule und meine Englischkenntnisse sind daher sehr schlecht.
Folgendes Gespräch habe ich vorbereitet, wobei die Fragen meistens schon vorgegeben waren.
Ich hoffe ihr seid so nett und könnt mir einige Sätze korrigieren bzw. verbessern.
Einige Fragen konnte ich nicht beantworten, ich hoffe ihr könnt mir Vorschläge machen, denn die Antworten müssen nicht stimmen, da meine Professorin keine Infos über mich hat, also kann ich ihr viel erzählen hauptsache es hört sich gut an und lässt sich mit wenig Englischkenntnissen sagen
Fragen werde ich unterstreichen !



How did you come here / was it difficult to find us?
Oh, it wasn't difficult, because I had this helpful description with the map you sent me.


Tell something about you.
My Name is Martin Kraus. I´m nineteen years old and come from Zweibrücken.
I play drums since x years, so I am very interested in music, classic rock ans soul for example. And I am also playing in a band with a couple of friends.
In my freetime i meet frinds, going out and listen to music.

Where would you like to live? Why?
I would like to live in London. I habe been there last summer and I liked the city, it was pretty impressive that it is so busy and so fast. I would like to get into these kind of big city life.

Your favourite travel destination?
Oh, I have never been to australia. That woud be my favorite destination I guess, the landscape, surrounded by oceans, diving, surfing. And also the weather is not that bad.

Do you do sports?
Yes, every mourning I jog about ten kilometers. It makes me fit and wakes me up for the day. And I like to go swimming, in summer I do that twice per week.

What was the last concert you went to see?
My last concert i saw was from Kansas and Status Quo in Saarbrücken.
It was great, I liked it a lot, great bands, great music.

Where did you go to school?
From 2005 to 2008 i visit a commercial school and finish it with a high school degree majoring in commerce.
Since october this year i study the study course of financial services at the university of applied sciences in EDIT ADMIN.
When i finished my study in 2013 i have a Bachelor degree.

Why did you choose to study here?
I´m really interested in the economy and the study course of financial services seemed the right for me.

Whats your favourite subjects in school?
My favourite subjects are geography and mathematics.

How describe you your friends?
Well, I never asked them to do that (dabei kannste ruhig mal lachen, aber nicht laut)
But I think they would say that I am a nice guy, a teamplayer you can trust in and someone who is always there when help is needed.

What level of salary are you expecting?
My salary request is in line with the usual remuneration for the position.

Own Questions?
What are my working hours?
How many people are working for the company?
Do I need something else for the job, like a driving licence or a car?
What do you people are doing in your lunchbreak, do you go out for lunch?

EDIT ADMIN

Falls mir noch Fragen einfallen, werde ich sie hier editieren.
Vielen Dank für eure Mühe

[Delfino]

Grüße.
Ich habe folgendes Problem: Ich studiere zur Zeit Finanzdienstleistungen an einer Universität und
muss in knapp einer Woche ein Interview vor der Klasse halten.
Leider hatte ich bisher nur Französisch in der Schule und meine Englischkenntnisse sind daher sehr schlecht.
Folgendes Gespräch habe ich vorbereitet, wobei die meisten Fragen schon vorgegeben waren.
Ich hoffe ihr seid so nett und könnt mir einige Sätze korrigieren bzw. verbessern.
Einige Fragen konnte ich nicht beantworten, ich hoffe ihr könnt mir Vorschläge machen.
Die Antworten müssen nicht stimmen, da meine Professorin keine Infos über mich hat,
also kann ich ihr viel erzählen Hauptsache es hört sich gut an und lässt sich mit wenig Englischkenntnissen sagen
Fragen werde ich unterstreichen !


How did you come here / was it difficult to find us?
How was your journey and was it difficult to find us?
It wasn't difficult. Thank you (again) for sending me the map with the (detailed) description. Both were very helpful.

Please tell something about yourself.
My Name is Martin Kraus. I'm nineteen years old and come from Zweibrücken wich is a small town near ... , Germany.
I am very interested in music, classic rock and soul for example. I play drums since 200x. (or) I play drums for xx years.
I am a member of xyz. It's a band I'm playing in with a couple of my friends.
In my spare time I like to meet my friends, to go out and to listen to music.

Do you go to live concerts and if you do
which was the last concert you went to?
Yes, I do go to live concerts. The last concert I went to was from Kansas and Status Quo in Saarbrücken.
It was really fantastic, I liked it very much. The band was great and the music was awesome.

Where would you like to live and why?
I would like to live in London. I have been there last summer and I liked the city.
It was very impressive that everything is so busy and so fast.
I would really like to get a job there to get a kind of big city life.

What is your favourite travel destination?
Well, I have never been to Australia. That woud be my favorite destination.
I think the warm climate is very attractive and I like the different landscape.
It is surrounded by oceans, so there are also opportunities for diving and surfing.

Do you do any sports?
Yes, every morning I'm jogging about ten kilometers. It keeps me in shape and
wakes me up for the day. In the summer I like to go swimming twice per week.

Where did you go to school?
From 2005 to 2008 I attended a commercial school and finished it with a high school degree majoring in commerce.
Since October this year I'm studying Financial Services at the University of Applied Sciences in ... .
I'll have earned a Bachelor degree when I'm finished my studies in 2013.

Why did you choose to study (t)here?
I'm really interested in the economy and the program of Financial Services seemed to be the right one for me.

What were your favourite subjects in school/university?
My favourite subjects were geography and mathematics.
My favourite courses are ... .

How do your friends describe you?
Well, I never asked them to do that. But I think they would say that I am a nice guy,
a team player you can trust and someone who is always there when you need help.

What level of salary are you expecting?
I guess, my salary request is in line with the usual remuneration for this position.

Own questions?
Do I need something else for the job, like a driving licence or a car?

In which branch would I be working in the beginning and will that change often later on?

What will my usual working hours be?
(I see, you hope to have a live outside the company. I'm sure you won't when you work for us...


How many people are working for the company? (Never ask something simple like that! You should have find that out in advance of any interview...)

What do you people do (I' recomend you never use this expression in a serious workplace situation!
It ephasises the distance between you. You will never e part of any team with an attitude expressed by that....)
in your lunchbreak - do you go out or do all just order in?

Is there a nice place around here where we can eat lunch?

I'm sorry I did not highlighted all the changes ...

mourning = ? check it out with a dictionary...

[Water]

Vielen Dank für die Korrektur
Bei "Mourning" hab ich mich wohl vertippt, ich habs aber jetzt mal nachgeschlagen

Ich hab noch ein paar Fragen zusammengestellt und bitte um eine weitere Korrektur bzw. Verbesserung.
Vielleicht kann mir ja jemand eine passendere Antwort geben

Where do you do your internship? What have you done there?

I had a internship at a Bank called Sparkasse Südwestpfalz in Zweibrücken in 2008. My tasks include attending
conference calls and meetings.
I also worked with a few databases inputting and organizing information. I used Microsoft Excel and
Microsoft Word. In addition, I compiled files, filed papers and input information and
folders into the computer.

How do you handle stress?

Stress is very important to me. With stress, I do the best possible job.
I need stress to stay motivated and productive.

What would be your ideal job?

I don´t know if there is such a thing as a "ideal job" because different people add unique talents to each position.

Bei dieser Frage wusste ich nicht wirklich was ich antworten soll, daher hab ich die Frage einfach gegoogelt und das kam dabei heraus. Vielleicht habt Ihr eine Idee

Where do you see yourself ten years from now?

I will working in a higher position and have a challenging job, in which I am
able to develop my career."

What are you major weaknesses / strenghts?

I´m very reliable, motivated flexible and be able to work long hours under pressure.
My weakness is that i wanna do all perfect.

[Delfino]

Where did you do your internship? What have you done there?

I had a internship at a Bank called Sparkasse Südwestpfalz in Zweibrücken in 2008.
My main tasks included the use of various databases, Microsoft Excel and Microsoft Word to input and structure information.
In addition, I attended conference calls and prepared many meetings including the compilation of the necessary files.


How do you handle stress?

Stress management is very important to me.
I feel highly motivated and more productive in a demanding work environment and
I know that can perform (very) well especially in stressful situations.


What would be the ideal job for you?

I don't know if there is such a thing as a "ideal job"
because different people add unique talents to each position.
I think the ideal position for me would be ...


Where do you see yourself in five or in ten years from now?

I guess we can easily agree that having a challenging job is the basis of great archivements and innovative work.
I know that I want to develop my career. So I'd like to see myself in a higher position (hopefully) in this company.


What are you major strenghts and weaknesses?

I'm a very reliable, motivated flexible person.
As I mentioned before I am able to work under pressure and long hours.
My greatest weakness is that I want to do all 'things' the perfect way.

[Water]

Dankeschön

Noch eine kurze Ergänzung, dann hab ich wohl alles

I want do apply to ***** as a bank clerk.
My Main Tasks will include to advise customers and to handle with credit and construction financing.

Ich möchte mich als Bankkaufmann bei der ***** bewerben.
Meine Hauptaufgaben wird die Beratung von Kunden und die Bearbeitung von Krediten und der Baufinanzierung sein.

[Delfino]

I'd like apply to ***** as a bank clerk.
My main tasks will (probably) include advising customers and handling the credits for construction projects.

Ich möchte mich als Bankkaufmann bei der ***** bewerben.
Meine Hauptaufgaben werden (wahrscheinlich) die Beratung von Kunden und die Bearbeitung von Krediten zur Baufinanzierung sein.

[Water]

I'd like apply to ***** as a bank clerk.
My main tasks will (probably) include advising customers and handling the credits for construction projects.

Ich möchte mich als Bankkaufmann bei der ***** bewerben.
Meine Hauptaufgaben werden (wahrscheinlich) die Beratung von Kunden und die Bearbeitung von Krediten zur Baufinanzierung sein.

Kommt nach dem "like" noch ein "to"?

I´d like to apply to ***** as a bank clerk.

[Delfino]

Kommt nach dem "like" noch ein "to"?
Ja, stimmt.

I'd like to apply to ***** as a bank clerk.