Could you help me to correct a ( the?) short message?

[Chloe]

Hello!
Yesterday I visited my friend and now I'd like to thank you. I'd like to send you a short message and it'd be very nice if you could correst it.
"Hi S.! Thank you for yesterday evening! It was very nice! I had a lot of fun with you! You sang very well and the film was good. I wish you a good Sunday and hope that we see us soon!

How can I end my message? Can I write "Take care"?

Thank you very much!!!

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hello!
Yesterday I visited my friend and now I'd like to thank him/her. I'd like to send him/her a short message and it'd be very nice if you could correct it.
"Hi S.! Thank you for yesterday evening! It was very nice! I had a lot of fun with you! You sang very well and the film was good. I wish you a nice Sunday and hope that we will meet again soon!

How can I end my message? Can I write "Take care"?

Thank you very much!!!

Yes you can write "take care" at the end of your message.

[Chloe]

Hello Keswick!
Thank you very much for your help! It's very important for me to write correctly.