Waere nettt wenn jemand dies korrigieren koennte.

[Awesome]

Waere nettt wenn jemand dies korrigieren koennte.

Danke.

mfg Awesome




A lot of “isms” affect my life, but the strongest one is the technicism. I trust the internet more than I am supposed to do. For instance, I have an email account and I write messages to other person that have a loft of details and no one else should read this. I save pictures on my computer instead of printing them out. I put my trust in the fact, that the picture are saved there but if the computer crashes all my picture will be away.
Scientism affects my worldview in this way that I really have to ask myself if the story of the creation is true. I have to decide whether I believe in what the bible says or in what a scientist has told me. My Christian world begins to totter because the scientific way is more plausible. It is founded with proofs that you cannot really refute.
Individualism is another “ism” which affects especially my lifestyle. I try to not be like other people. I do not want me to be told I do something just because my friends or other persons have done it. I want to be proud of myself what I do and what I do not do.
I would say that rationalism is another “ism” that influences my actions especially my decisions. Often, when I have to make a decision I rather think if it makes sense and is good for me than I think about what Jesus would do. Sometimes it is the same way but it sometimes is different. I would say that a reason of my rational thinking is that it often is very difficult what Jesus would do.

[Delfino]

Wäre nett wenn jemand dies korrigieren könnte.

Danke.

MfG
Awesome


A lot of “isms” affect my life, but the most important one is the technicism. I trust the Internet more than I am probably
supposed to do. For instance, I have an e-mail account and I write messages to other persons. Some contain a lot of private details
which no one else should know about. I save all my pictures on my computer instead of printing them out.
I put my trust in the fact, that the picture are saved there, but if the harddrive of the computer fails all my picture will be gone.

Scientism affects my view on the world in a way that I really have to ask myself if I believe that the story of creation is true.
I have to decide whether I can continue to believe in what the bible says or what nearly all scientist tell us. My Christian world
begins to totter because the scientific theory of evolution is much more plausible. It is founded on scientific evidence which means
there are facts that cannot easily be ignored.

Individualism is another “ism” which affects especially my lifestyle. I try to be different from other people.
I do not like to be told what I should do. Especially if the only given reason is that my friends or other persons have done it.
I want to be proud of myself, of what I do and that includes what I dicide not do.

I would say that rationalism is another “ism” that influences my actions especially my decisions. Often, when I have to make an important decision
I try to think about it in a rational way. Does it make sense and is it really good for me rather than thinking about what Jesus would do.
Sometimes it is the same but at times it is different too. I would say that a reason for me to use common sense is that it is often very difficult to imagine
what Jesus would do.

You may want to consider e-mail encryption and creating regular backups...

[Awesome]

Danke fuer die Korrektur.

Waren das alles Fehler oder manchmal auch nur stylistische Verbesserungen ?

Das mit dem verschluesseln weiss ich, doch das wollte ich jetzt nicht in den Text reinbringen, weil es darum eigentlich nicht geht.

Ich glaube den einen Satz habe ich so ausgedrueckt dass du ihn anders verstanden hast. Troztdem danke fuer deinen Vorschlag.

I do not want me to be told I do something just because my friends or other persons have done it.

Damit meinte ich eigentlich das ich nicht das mit was befohlen wird sondern dass ich es nicht mag wenn jemand behauptet ich wuerde es machen weil ein anderer es macht (im Sinne von nachmachen)

Danke nochmals

mfg Awesome

[Delfino]

Waren das alles Fehler oder manchmal auch nur stilistische Verbesserungen?

Natürlich sind auch einige stilistische Änderungen dabei, die hoffentlich deinen Inhalt unterstützen.

I do not want me to be told I do something just because my friends or other persons have done it.
Damit meinte ich eigentlich das ich nicht das mit was befohlen wird sondern
dass ich es nicht mag wenn jemand behauptet ich wuerde es machen weil ein anderer es macht (im Sinne von nachmachen)

I don't like to be told that I'm doing something just because others have done it.

I don't like to be told that I'm doing certain things only because someone else is doing it.

[Awesome]

Vielen Dank noch mal.

Gibt es irgendeinen bestimmten Grund warum du nun einmal "just" und einmal "only" benutzt hast?

Wolltest du nur ein bisschen Abwechsung reinbringen oder steckt mehr dahinter?

[Delfino]

I don't like to be told that I'm doing something just because others have done it.

Ich mag es nicht, dass man mir sagt I tue etwas nur weil andere es getan haben.


I don't like to be told that I'm doing certain things only because someone else is doing it.

Ich mag es nicht, dass man mir sagt I tue bestimmte Dinge nur weil jemand anders es tut.


Nein, kein bestimmter Grund - es sind nur Varianten.
Der beste Ausdruck ist immer auch etwas Geschmackssache.
Du kannst die Satzbestandteile oder Wörter auch anders kombinieren.