englisch referat

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Hallo muss nächste woche nen englisch referat halten und ich würde mich wenn das bis dahin mal jmd nach fehlern durchgucken könnte.
Schon mal danke im voraus.


Hello,
I’m the System administrator from the first online university for Business and Informatics.
With our university we established an unique system of studying, which provides our students with an until now unseen comfort of studying.
Our students don’t have to travel early in the morning to their university just to attend one lecture.
They don’t have to wait like 2h just because they have a free period in-between and they don’t have to fear about getting a seat in the lecture hall.
You might think now that this is impossible.
But no, it’s not.
We managed to digitalize our lectures so that they are available all over the world via the internet.
So you can’t miss a lecture anymore.

And if a lecture is quite hard to understand you can just see it twice or even more often until you get the point.
Anyway if you have questions about a lecture you can easily ask one of our professors via Skype or chat during several consulting hours within the week.
Furthermore we set up a forum for our students where they can help each other.
And if you still don’t understand anything afterwards you may look at our universities homepage, where you can find a massive amount of online tutorials which are mostly provided from our partner universities . These are really easy to understand since they are generally in flash. So it is possible to guide you step by step through hard terms.
Anyway if you want to study even further you may look in our online library, which became the largest in Germany lately, for an eBook you would like to read. There it will be probably possible for everyone to find an eBook he wants since we have already more than 600.000 eBooks and number is rising from year to year.
Furthermore our online library don’t have the problem like normal libraries that a book can be lent already since we can just copy it as often as we want.
Additionally we have nearly no restrictions for our students to get a place at our university, since we don’t have limited lecture halls like other universities have.

Like you might have already seen we have a partnership with the internet provider “1und1” and with the computer store dell.
These provide us on the one hand with a 15” laptop, which everyone of our first semester students gets and on the other hand with servers which allows us to handle more than 50000 requests to our podcast at the same time. So you will probably never have any problems to connect to our podcasts.
In Addition it has to be said that our laptops are adapted to the special needs of your course of studies. So if you study for example programming, programs like visual studios will be pre installed, while as if you study media design you will have programs like Photoshop.

So if we put it in a nut shell our system of studying will be probably the future of studying, since we use the special advantages of upcoming technologies.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo, ich muss nächste Woche ein Englisch Referat halten und ich würde mich freuen, wenn das bis dahin mal jemand nach Fehlern durchgucken könnte.
Schon mal danke im Voraus.

Hi , bitte gib Dir nächstes Mal ein wenig mehr Mühe mit der Rechtschreibung und Grammatik, manche Menschen wollen hier ihr Deutsch verbessern... Danke!

Hello,
I’m the System Administrator of the first "Online University for Business and Informatics".
With our university we have established an unique system of studying, which provides our students with a comfort of studying hitherto unheard of.
Our students don’t have to travel to their university early in the morning in order to attend just one lecture.
They don’t have to wait for hours just because they have a free period between two lectures and they don’t have to worry about getting a seat in the lecture hall.
You might think now that this is impossible.
But no, it’s not.
We have managed to digitalize our lectures so that they are available all over the world via the internet.
So you can’t miss a lecture anymore.

And if a lecture should be quite hard to understand, you can just look at it twice or even more often until you understand it.
If you have questions about a lecture, however, you can easily ask one of our professors via Skype or chat with them during the several consulting hours within the week.
Furthermore, we have set up a forum for our students where they can help each other.
And if neither of these possibilities seem to help you, you may look at our university's homepage, where you can find a massive amount of online tutorials which are mostly provided by our partner universities. These are really easy to understand since they are generally in flash (Whatever that might be...? ). So it is possible to guide you through hard terms step by step.
And if you should want to study even further, you may want to use our online library, which has lately become the largest in Germany, for an eBook you would like to read. Just about everyone should be able to find the eBook he wants there, since we have already more than 600.000 eBooks and the number is rising from year to year.
Furthermore, our online library doesn't share the problem of "normal" libraries, namely that a book is already lent out, since we can just copy it as often as we want.
To top it all, at our university we have virtually no restrictions on the number of students, since we don’t have the problem of limited lecture hall space like other universities have.

As you might have already noticed, we have a partnership with the internet provider “1und1” and with the computer store dell.
They provide both a 15” laptop, which everyone of our first semester students gets, on the one hand, and on the other hand servers which allows us to handle more than 50000 requests to our podcast at the same time. So you will probably never have any problems to connect to our podcasts.
In addition to this I would like to mention that our laptops are adapted to the special needs of your course of studies. So if you study programming, for example, programs like visual studios will be pre installed, whereas if you study media design you will have programs like Photoshop.

So to put it in a nut shell, our system of studying will probably be the future of studying, since we make use of the special advantages of upcoming technologies.

Wirklich beeindruckend guter Text und meine Vorschläge sind größtenteils genau das: Vorschläge. Aber ab und zu doch auch mal ein Fehlerchen...
Ich habe hin und wieder "Present perfect" eingefügt, um damit deutlich zu machen, dass die Neuerungen ja jetzt in der Gegenwart positiv wirken, OK?

Good luck says
Duckduck