Verbesserungsvorschlag für Referat? Bitte zeitnah antworten

[Kathi]

Hallöchen,

habe bei einem Referat ein paar Sätze, wo ich mir nicht ganz sicher bin, ob die passen.

•Remove your sunglasses especially if the sun isn’t shining.
•Speak clearly and slowly if you speak to somebody on the phone. Pay attention and be kind on the choice of words.
•At welcoming use phrases as "I’m delighted to meet you personally now "
•People with a degree like Doctor Doctor Professor Braxton are just called Prof. Braxton. You always have to say the highest degree.
• Under colleagues the rank lowest one, but you always have to open the door for women. Opening correctly and not pushing open the door.
• Don’t drink too much coffee because your body transpire more and you get halitosis easily.

Meine Unklarheiten habe ich fett markiert. Ich freue mich über eine Korrektur

Danke

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallöchen,

habe bei einem Referat ein paar Sätze, wo ich mir nicht ganz sicher bin, ob die passen.

•Remove your sunglasses especially if /oder "when" the sun isn’t shining.
•Speak clearly and slowly if /oder when you speak to somebody on the phone. Be kind /oder polite and pay attention to the choice of words.
•When bidding somebody welcome use phrases like "I’m delighted to meet you personally now."
•People with a degree like Doctor Doctor Professor Braxton are just called Prof. Braxton. You always have to use the highest degree.
• Among colleagues the rank lowest one, ???verstehe ich nicht, wie geht's weiter? but you always have to open the door for women. Make sure you open it correctly and don't just push it open.
• Don’t drink too much coffee because your body will transpire more and you might have bad breath (easily).

Meine Unklarheiten habe ich fett markiert. Ich freue mich über eine Korrektur

Danke

Hinweis: oben ist sowohl "when" als auch "if" möglich, einmal heißt es "wenn" (zeitlich gesehen), einmal "falls" (Bedingung).

Good luck says
Duckduck

[Kathi]

Also erst einmal vielen lieben Dank

Den Satz hab ich leider falsch kopiert, sorry.

Vollständig lautet er:

• If clients meet you you generally have to open doors. Under colleagues the rank lowest one, but you always have to open the door for women. Opening correctly and not pushing open the door.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Also erst einmal vielen lieben Dank

Den Satz hab ich leider falsch kopiert, sorry.

Vollständig lautet er:

• If you meet clients, you generally have to open the doors. Among colleagues the person who ranks below the others usually does so, but you always have to open the door for women.

Good luck says
Duckduck