Three party essay (5 paragraphs)

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Three party essay (5 paragraphs)

Beitrag von kola813 »

Hey Leute, erstmal super das ihr hier sowas wie eine Hilfe anbietet um den Leuten zu helfen welche ein paar oder doch ein paar mehr Probleme mit der englischen Sprache haben.

Im Rahmen eines Seminars muss ich ein Essay über etwa eine Seite anfertigen und würde mich über die ein oder andere Korrektur sehr freuen.

I am one of many pedagogy students at Erfurt University. Arrived at third semester studying still delighting me and I am just as dedicated as at the beginning. Despite all that there are several disappointing issues. I am frustrated by the crowded seminar rooms, the writing of term papers and the test week.

Crowded seminar rooms are no good premise for successful learning. In connection with the overcrowded meetings there are some factors which saddening me a lot. For one thing, the level of sound in such courses is so high, that I find it extremely difficult keeping concentrated and follow the lecturer‘s comments the whole period of time. Reason for the high noise level are the innumerable intern discussions between several groups of students during the lecture, whereas the lecturer do not bother to use the available microphone providing better comprehensibility. For another thing it is not possible to find a vacant seat if you appear just before the lecture begins. That’s why these students have to be satisfied with a seat on a stair or even a standing place so that they get problems with an imperceptible blackboard painting and manufacturing qualitative notes. According these facts, which exceedingly disturbing my attention and my concentration it is ineluctable for me to seize the seminar conducted by a postgraduate to remove problems in comprehension and eventually pass the examination. However other lecturer‘s not offer such additional exercises...

I am also having problems in writing term papers which are prerequisite in most of my lectures to pass the seminar. The biggest difficulty in coherence with writing these papers is my own motivation. The fact that I have to concentrate on not only one term paper but rather on two or three causes that my motivation in coherence with writing term papers always is virtually zero. Another point which causing me trouble is the specialist literature. This kind of literature is absolutely necessary to write a high-valued research paper because it is nearly impossible finding good information from the internet or magazines. For me it is really onerous to understand such texts and collect appropriate information out of them. Additionally I have to criticize lecturers supervision and support, I think it have to be their assignment to give useful hints how to write such a term paper but no one ever gave me any advices. Singularly these couple of facts driving me to desperation again and again.

The full lectures and handling with term papers causing me many sorrows in studying, but the main problem represents the test week which is feared by almost every student and is the worst issue by a long way. In this week the students have to complete their semester with writing tests to successfully pass their occupied courses. This sounds easy, but it is not just only one test, partially the students have to write three, four or maybe five tests within one week, it is easy to imagine how depressing this could appeal. I for one had to write one test on Monday, the second on Thursday and even three on Friday afternoon. According this example, it necessary to prepare directly after one test at the same day to feel prepared enough to pass the next and not get kicked from your main- or substudies if you fail.

But all in all I am proud to be a student at Erfurt University. Precisely because over the course of time the exams are not getting less difficult, it remains equal the same number of students which attending the seminars and it seems that I have to write several term papers in the near future, i have to try to cope with that embarrassments and make the best of my study to successfully pass it.



Vielen Dank im Voraus :)

Delfino

Re: Three party essay (5 paragraphs)

Beitrag von Delfino »

Hey Leute, erstmal eine super Idee, dass ihr hier sowas wie eine Hilfe anbietet, um den Leuten zu helfen
welche ein paar oder doch ein paar mehr Probleme mit der englischen Sprache haben.

Im Rahmen eines Seminars muss ich einen Essay von etwa einer Seite anfertigen
und würde mich über die ein oder andere Korrektur sehr freuen.

Vielen Dank im Voraus :)


I am one of many the students of pedagogy at the University of Erfurt.
As a third-year student I'm still delighted by my studies and I am just as dedicated as at the beginning.
Although there are several disappointing issues, which make me really sad often

For instance, I am very frustrated about the crowded seminar rooms, the amount of term papers we have to write
and especially the exam week. Our crowded seminar rooms in connection with the overcrowded meetings
are not a good place for successful learning. The level of noise in such big courses is so high,
that I find it extremely difficult to stay concentrated enough to follow the lecture's talk for the whole time.
The reason for this high noise level are the innumerable intern discussions between several groups of students during the lecture,
which are in part coursed by the lecturer who does not bother to use the available microphone to provide a better comprehensibility.

Another annoying thing is that it is often not possible to find a vacant seat, if you arrive shortly before the lecture begins.
That’s why many students have to be satisfied by sitting on the stairs or even a standing place.
They get regularly problems with hardly visible text and figures on the blackboard, which prevents them from making qualitative notes.

In accordance with these facts my attention and my concentration are exceedingly disturbed during such lectures.
Therefore I'm happy that at least a few lectures offer a few additional exercises in the seminars conducted by a postgraduate
to remove problems of comprehension. So it is ineluctably to attend these. However, the situation is sometimes/usually the same and
you can only hope to eventually pass the examination.


I am also having problems to write term papers which are a prerequisite to pass the seminar for most of my lectures.
The biggest difficulty in coherence with writing these papers is my own motivation. The fact that I have to concentrate on not only one term paper
but rather on two or three always causes a decrease of my motivation to write term papers at all.

Another point which causing me trouble is the specialist literature. This kind of literature is absolutely necessary to write a high-valued research paper
because it is nearly impossible to find good information on the internet or in magazines. For me it is a really onerous task
to understand such texts, which means to find the appropriate part and condense the most important information out of it.
Additionally I have to criticize my lecturer's supervision and support, I think it is their purpose to support me with useful information and hints on
how to write a term paper. Unfortunately not one gave me any usable advice ever. These couple of facts alone make me desperate
again and again.

While studying the full lecture rooms and the handling of the term papers are a great worry to me,
but the biggest problem by far is represented by the exam[/b] week, which is feared by almost every student.
During this week the students have to complete their term by successfully passing written exams in all their courses.
This may sound easy, but it is not just a test about the last topic in each subject. The content of all lectures and assignments
are included in these exams. The students have to write three, four or maybe five of these exams within one week,
So it is easy to imagine how depressing this can appeal. I, for one, had to write one test on Monday, the second on Thursday
and on Friday afternoon another three. According to this example, it necessary to start the preparation for the next exam
directly after one has finished - at the same day. This will hopefully make you ready to pass the next exam.
if you fail you can get kicked out from your main area of studies or subsidiary subject.

But all in all I am proud to be a student at the University of Erfurt. Especially because the exams are not getting more difficult
over the time of my course. The number of students which are attending the seminars remains the same.

It seems that I have to write several term papers in the near future. So I will have to cope with the embarrassments of the time
and try make the best of my studies to successfully complete it.


I know studying is hard, but you need to
try to start preparing your exams
during the term and not only between the exam days...

Good luck!

kola813

Re: Three party essay (5 paragraphs)

Beitrag von kola813 »

Hey Delfino.

Ich muss sagen das du mein Essay echt spitze überarbeitet hast. Dafür bedanke ich mich natürlich sehr.

Jedoch haben wir gelernt das vor dem Wort "which" wenn es im relative clause vorkommt kein Komma geschrieben wird. Habe ich das falsch aufgenommen weil du bei der überarbeiteten Version mit Komma gearbeitet hast?


Mit freundlichen Grüßen und nochmal, Top Sache! Danke

Delfino

Re: Three party essay (5 paragraphs)

Beitrag von Delfino »

Sorry, ich bin nicht sooo sicher mit den Regeln der englischen Kommasetzung...

ein paar interessante Grammatik-Links:

Relativsätze mit who/which und that
http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/grammar/who_which.htm

that und which - Bestimmende und nicht bestimmende Relativsätze
http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/grammar/relativsaetze.htm

Englische Grammatik - Erläuterungen
http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/grammar_list/alle.htm