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Mrs.Isi

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Kann mir vielleich jemand diesen Text überarbeiten?
Ich bin mir nicht so ganz sicher:D

Dankeschön

Hey guys
I'll tell you once already to the beginning. Actually, the video is stupid. But who wants me to hear. : D HELLO
So okay! So I'm really happy. I peeped a few days ago, well better said yesterday in internet matters after twilight. Then I saw a video on YouTube and thought, "NO, not true! Twilight scene it! In Germany, I've never heard of them and I immediately looked at me then, of course. It is Kalebnation. He and his friends try it out and I find, it is so great! I've already checked at Amazon.de, of course, the German side, but since there was not. Then I thought, I look at ebay.de times but since there was not, too... Of course. I'll keep you posted. I can not believe how crazy I am really after. How mad I am at all! I am so changing from one theme to another. In any case even comes New Moon soon in cinemas. Oh my gosh. I'm so happy! With us, the 26th is a November out. I see but I had before. This Sunday on Nov 22. It goes four hours. First Twilight comes and then New Moon. I've been counting the days a while. I cannot wait anymore. You know what bothers me? When Edward comes into the sun. His body has not even shaved. I honestly was thinking that she shaved his chest. In the book, his body is described as so smooth. I thought that was already a bit stupid, but I must admit the film would still so great! Of course. And have you seen how it has changed Taylor Lautner. Wow, I find it so fantastic. I will post throughout the day then a video. If you so wish. That depends on whether you even want the video here turn aside to look.

Duckduck (Contributor)

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Hi :) ,

Ich würde es ja machen, wenn die Übersetzung Deine eigene Arbeit wäre, aber diesen Text hat ein Übersetzungsprogramm verbrochen, nicht?

Grüße
Duckduck

Keswick (Contributor)

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Aye, Duckduck, ich schaetze Babelfish, kommt nach Ueberpruefung noch am ehesten ran.