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[Cateyes]

Hallo!
Ich muss morgen dieses kurze essay abgeben!
Könnt ihr einmal Fehlerlesen?
Danke schon einmal im Voraus!


Education: yes or no?

Fact is that Education has become a normal part of our daily life and the fewest question the things we learn and if this things are right.
And this is understandable because only through education we have all our conveniences like cars and computers.
So thirst a definition: Education means that someone is going to learn to understand all social, cultural and scientific structures of the world and with education you have the power to think critically and independently about something.
An example of education is school education.
It enables us to study and guarantees us a steady job in the future.
With it we receive a big general knowledge.
Preconditions for a good education are qualified teachers and a good learning sphere.
By now all listed up arguments sound positive but there are also some examples for “bad education”.
“Bad education “means well mapped-out education: The state sets the way of thinking in advantage like the totalitarianism.
This is very dangerous, because it leads to minor citizens.
As a conclusion I can say that education is positive, as long as nobody takes advantage of it.
Education gives us comprehension and knowledge and knowledge is power!

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo Du!

Wenn Du es gestern reingestellt hast und heute abgeben musst - ist es jetzt bereits zu spät und wir brauchen uns die Arbeit nicht mehr zu machen. Schade

Tipp für nächstes Mal: früher reinstellen, damit wir es rechtzeitig zu sehen bekommen.

Good luck says
Duckduck