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ABer bitte nicht wundern, dass so viel falsch ist!!

ENGLISH IN MY LIFE

I think English is very important because I use English every day at the school and at home.
I surf in the Internet and talk with Swedish or Slovakian people on Facebook. And all speak English very good. Lot’s of People speak German, too. For example my Slovakian friends. But more people speak English. I go abroad without my family, and I must speak English.
Very good Books are in English and not in German. So I must read the book in English.
Very good musicians sing in English. So I must know, what they singing.
Later I need this Language for study because lots of good professor speak English, so many lecture or course of studies are in English.
I don’t know, was ich warden will
But in many Jobs you need English because globalization. For learn English, I would go abroad after my school.
All in all English is very important in my life and I have to learn it.

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I think English is very important because I use English every day (both) at theschool and at home.
I surf on the Internet and talk with Swedish or (ich wuerde eher “and” benutzen) Slovakian people on Facebook. And everybody speaks English very good. A lot of people speak German, too, for example my Slovakian friends. (Ich wuerde statt “too” eher “also” benutzen, welches dann vor „German” gesetzt werden wuerde) But more people speak English. I am going to go abroad without my family, and therefore I must know how to speak English.
Very good Books are in English and are not in German. So I must read these books in English.
Very good musicians sing in English. So I must know, what they singing.
Later am going to need this language in order to go to university because a lot of good professor speak English, so many lecture or course of studies are in English.
I do not know, what I want to become.
But in many Jobs you need English because of the ( da bin ich mir selber nicht sicher) globalization. (In order) to learn English, I would go abroad after my school.
All in all English is very important in my life and I have to learn it.


Ich habe nun mal versucht dir weiterzuhelfen.
Bitte korrigiert mcih fals ich einen Fehler gemacht haben sollte.

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Man kann "lots' zwar benutzen an Stelle von "a lot", aber es ist Umganssprache und somit solltest du es vermeiden beim schreiben.
Das selbe gilt fuer Apostrophe.

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[Keswick (Contributor)]

Aber bitte nicht wundern, dass so viel falsch ist!!

ENGLISH IN MY LIFE

I think English is very important because I use English every day in the school and at home.
I surf in the internet and I talk with Swedish and Slovakian people on Facebook. And they all speak very good English. Many of the people speak German, too. For example my Slovakian friends. But more people speak English. I go abroad without my family, where I have to speak English.
Some very good books are in English and not in German. So I have to read the book in English.
Very good musicians sing in English. So I want to know, what they are singing about.
I will need this language later, for my studies because many good professors speak English, so many lectures or courses of studies are in English.
I don’t know, was ich warden will (das ist nicht schwer: what I want to become)
But for many jobs you need English because of the globalization. I would go abroad after my school to improve my English.
All in all English is very important in my life and I have to learn it.