Leaving Home Correct Please

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Leaving Home Correct Please

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The given text is an extract of Laurie Lee's book "As I Walked Out One Midsummer Morning".

It deals with children leaving home and starting their own new life autonomously. A 19 old boy describes his feelings from the first step out of his parents door starting his long journey towards London.

While leaving the house at a bright summer morning he recalls his actions of the just hours before preparing his long journey. Though he knows about the difficulties that can occur on his trip he is feeling a good fortune and is happy to be finally alone in nature.

Keswick (Contributor)

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schnip hat geschrieben:The given text is an extract of Laurie Lee's book "As I Walked Out One Midsummer Morning".

It deals with children leaving home and starting their own new life autonomously. A 19-year-old boy describes his feelings from the first step out of his parents door starting his long journey towards London.

While leaving the house on a bright summer morning he recalls his actions of the hours just before preparing his long journey. Though he knows about the difficulties that can occur on his trip he is feeling good and is happy to finally be alone in nature.

Duckduck (Contributor)

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...describes his feelings from the first step out of his parents' door starting his long journey towards London.
Winzige Ergänzung.

Good luck says
Duckduck

Keswick (Contributor)

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Ah danke!

schnip

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danke euch^^