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Könntet ihr mal bitte Korrektur lesen??

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Hallo. Ich fände es sehr nett wenn jemand mal meine vielen kleinen Fehler korrigieren würde. Danke.
Ännchen

About Language Trips, high school years and school projects.

Now I want to tell about going abroad. In my opinion is going abroad a very good idea because languages are very important. You hear a native speaker and you can't understand something because he or she speaks with accent. If you went abroad when you are young, you learn more than old people who go abroad. So you must go now!
You have many possibilities: a Language Trip in the holiday or a high school year or a school project.
In my opinion are the Language Trip and the high school year the best possibility to learn a new language because you are alone without German people, so you can't speak German.
The languages Trip are in Holidays. It is better than in school time. You don't missing the school topics.
But the High school Year has advantages, too. You go to school like a normal child and speak with teachers and people. You are in an other school with other subjects. So you learn more English than you learn in your school because you learn Glossary, too.
Both of those possibilities have disadvantages. You go abroad. This is a new culture with new traditions. So maybe you don't like your host. The badest is, when you don't like your class. You haven't any friends. You are going to have more Patience. At first you understand not so much. The most problem: the money. The language trip and the high school year are very nice to learn a new language. But it isn't chap.
I think the school project isn't good to learn a new language because you needn't speak English. If a teacher or a classmate, who speak very good, was there, he or she could talk with the People. But it is cheaper than the high school Year or the Language Trip.
Das heißt nicht, dass das Project total schlecht ist. :question:
because you learn always a bit. Man wendet sein Englisch einfach mal an. :question: .
You learn as much you learn in your Holiday with your Parents.
All in all I would choose the high school Year, if i had the choice between the three possibilities. But I must save money. But after this Year i will be happy. My second favourite possibility is the language trip. The last one is the school project because you don't learn a lot.

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Ännchen hat geschrieben:Hallo. Ich fände es sehr nett, wenn jemand mal meine vielen kleinen Fehler korrigieren würde. Danke.
Ännchen

About language trips, high school years and school projects.

Now I want to tell you about going abroad. In my opinion going abroad is a very good idea because learning languages is very important. Without it you hear a native speaker and you can't understand anything because he or she speaks with an accent. If you go abroad when you are young, you learn more than old people who go abroad. So you must go now!
You have several possibilities: a language trip in the holiday or a high school year or a school project.
In my opinion the language trip and the high school year are the best possibilities to learn a new language because you are alone - without German people around you - so you can't speak German.
The languages trips are during the holidays. This is better than in the school time because you don't miss so much of the school topics.
But the high school year has advantages, too. You go to school like a normal child and speak with teachers and other pupils. But you are in a different school with other subjects taught in English, too. So you learn more English than you learn in your school at home because you learn Glossary,.
Both of these possibilities have disadvantages as well, though.
You go abroad and meet This is a new culture with new traditions. And maybe you don't like your host family. The worst case would be if you didn't like your class. And you couldn't find any friends.
You are going to need a lot of patience then. At first you don't understand not so very much. The biggest problem could be the money, though. The language trip and the high school year are both very nice opportunities to learn a new language, but they aren't cheap.
I think the school project isn't a good way to learn a new language because you don't have to speak English. If a teacher or another classmate are around, you can let them speak to the people. On the other hand it is cheaper than the high school year or the language trip.
So you couldn't say that the school project was altogether bad because, after all, you can learn some things by simply using the language. As if you were on a holiday with your parents in England.
All in all I would choose the high school year, if I had the choice between the three possibilities. Even if I had to save a lot of money. But after this year I would be happy. My second favourite possibility is the language trip. The last one is the school project because you don't learn a lot.
Best wishes!

Good luck says
Duckduck

Ännchen

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:big_thumb: DAAAANKE !!!! DAs ist ja soooo Lieb von dir!! Ich würde dir jetzt am liebsten eine Schokolade schenken!!! :spin: <- ich freu mich :freu: <- und klatsch dir applaus mehr kann ich nicht machen
Danke!!! Ännchen

Duckduck (Contributor)

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Wirklich gern geschehen, Ännchen! :spin:


Duckduck :bye: