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Sind diese Sätze stilistisch richtig?) Stilistische Änderungen von Sätzen

Bsp: Does the way people cook in different countries interested you?
Are you interested in the way people cook in different countries?

a) Do the music and dancing of different peoples fascinate you?
Lösung: Are you fascinated in music and dancing of different people?
b) Does the thought of lying in the sun and sipping cool wine attract you?
Then come and stay in our newly opened hotel X.
Lösung: Are you the though of lying in the sun and sipping cool wine attract you?
Come and stay in our newly opened hotel X.
c) Two famous architects from London designed the hotel.
Lösung: The hotel was designed by two famous architects from London.
d) Bowls of flowers and baskets of fruit decorate the rooms.
Lösung: The room are decorated bowls of flowers and baskets of fruit.
e) Excellent room service service and high quality cuisine will increase your
enjoyment.
Lösung: Your enjoyment are increased excellent room service and high
quality cuisine.
Herzlichen Dank für Ihre Hilfe!

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Sind diese Sätze stilistisch richtig?) Stilistische Änderungen von Sätzen

Bsp: Does the way people cook in different countries interest you?
Are you interested in the way people cook in different countries?

a) Do the music and dancing of different peoples fascinate you?
Lösung: Are you fascinated by music and dancing of different peoples?
b) Does the thought of lying in the sun and sipping cool wine attract you?
Then come and stay in our newly opened hotel X.
Lösung: Does the thought of lying in the sun and sipping cool wine attract you?
Come and stay in our newly opened hotel X.
c) Two famous architects from London designed the hotel.
Lösung: The hotel was designed by two famous architects from London.
d) Bowls of flowers and baskets of fruit decorate the rooms.
Lösung: The rooms are decorated with bowls of flowers and baskets of fruit.
e) Excellent room service service and high quality cuisine will increase your
enjoyment.
Lösung: Your enjoyment will be increased by excellent room service and high quality cuisine.
Herzlichen Dank für Ihre Hilfe!