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bad_10

Alles ok?!

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Hallo, könntet ihr den Text euch ma durchlesen und schauen, ob alles richtig ist?

In my opinion it was the false behaviour of the boys, because they are the father and they must take responsibilty. But despite this fact, they leave theirs girlfriend and want to start a new life without the baby. The excuse 'I don't ready to be a father' isn't okay, because the boys had fun by making love und now they must accept the consequenzes. I think it's the worst to leave their pregnant girlfriend, because they need mental support, specially before and after the birth, and not to be a single parent with a baby. All in all i can't understand the boys and i think it's exorbitant waht they have done.

Daaanke :freu:

Keswick (Contributor)

Re: Alles ok?!

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bad_10 hat geschrieben:Hallo, könntet ihr den Text euch mal durchlesen und schauen, ob alles richtig ist?

In my opinion it was the wrong behaviour of the boys, because they are the fathers and they must take responsibility. But despite this fact, they leave their girlfriends and want to start a new life without a baby. The excuse 'I am not ready to be a father' isn't okay, because the boys had fun by making love und now they must accept the consequences. I think it's the worst to leave their pregnant girlfriend, because they need mental support, especially before and after the birth, and it is difficult to be a single parent with a baby. All in all I can't understand the boys and I think what they have done is terrible.

Daaanke :freu: