What role does sport play in your life?
Ich kann zu nächste Woche ein comment zu dieser Frage schreiben.
Er soll mindestens 250 Wörter haben. Was für Themenschwerpunkte soll ich dort hineinnehmen, außer dass ich zuerst mal was Allgemeines und dann meine persönliche Einstellung schreibe?
Ist es besser, wenn ich erstmal auf Deutsch den Text schreibe und dann auf English?
What role does sport play in your life?
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Keswick (Contributor)
Re: What role does sport play in your life?
Ich wuerde mich auf deine persoenliche Meinung beschraenken, da die Frage ist welche Rolle Sport in deinem Leben spielt.
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schnip
Re: What role does sport play in your life?
Ich würde den Text gleich in Englisch schreiben, ansonsten nimmst du Vokabeln die du nicht kennst und verbringst ne lange Zeit vor Google oder Wörterbüchern 
.......außerdem steigerst du damit deine Fähigkeit Englisch zu denken und deine Gedankengänge werden in Englisch natürlicher (so ist es bei mir 
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.......außerdem steigerst du damit deine Fähigkeit Englisch zu denken und deine Gedankengänge werden in Englisch natürlicher (so ist es bei mir )-
clermp
Re: What role does sport play in your life?
Das ist natürlich noch nicht der ganze Text, aber trotzdem erstmal ein Anfang.
It is absolutly essential (significant) to beginn by saying that sport should be important for all peoples. The peoples should not only sport on Tv but also be active in a sport. In each city you can find some kinds of sport. Wether swimming, running or you can going in a fitness studio. Dann möchte ich schreiben,dass es viele mögliche Sportarten gibt, für Personen aller Altersgruppen oder so ähnlich.
Especially swimming is good for old and corpulent people because it is (gelenkschonend).
Anstatt people kann ich auch humans sagen, sonst kommt das so häufig vor.
It is absolutly essential (significant) to beginn by saying that sport should be important for all peoples. The peoples should not only sport on Tv but also be active in a sport. In each city you can find some kinds of sport. Wether swimming, running or you can going in a fitness studio. Dann möchte ich schreiben,dass es viele mögliche Sportarten gibt, für Personen aller Altersgruppen oder so ähnlich.
Especially swimming is good for old and corpulent people because it is (gelenkschonend).
Anstatt people kann ich auch humans sagen, sonst kommt das so häufig vor.
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clermp
Re: What role does sport play in your life?
2. Teil
extremely popular in our country is football and athletics. When the World Championship or the Olympic Games come on TV, a lot of people collect to be glued to the television and (mitfiebern) our German athletes. But also the women football is interesting for the TV viewer in the last years. Although football is a typical men sport but more and more women are interested in this sport. Another point is that active sport is healthy. On the one hand for some people it costs quite an effort, but on the other hand you increasing your stamina and you feeling better than before.
extremely popular in our country is football and athletics. When the World Championship or the Olympic Games come on TV, a lot of people collect to be glued to the television and (mitfiebern) our German athletes. But also the women football is interesting for the TV viewer in the last years. Although football is a typical men sport but more and more women are interested in this sport. Another point is that active sport is healthy. On the one hand for some people it costs quite an effort, but on the other hand you increasing your stamina and you feeling better than before.
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Keswick (Contributor)
Re: What role does sport play in your life?
clermp hat geschrieben: It is absolutly essential (significant) to begin by saying that sport should be important for all people. Not only should the people watch sport on TV but also be active inasport. In every city you can find some kinds of sport. Whether it is swimming, running oryou cangoing to a fitness studio. Dann möchte ich schreiben,dass es viele mögliche Sportarten gibt, für Personen aller Altersgruppen oder so ähnlich. Especially swimming is good for old and corpulent people because it is (gelenkschonend).
Football and athletics are extremely popular in our country. When the World Championship or the Olympic Games are on TV, a lot of people collect (??) to be glued to the television and (mitfiebern) our German athletes. But althoughthewomen football became interesting for the TV viewer in the last years. Although football is a typical male sportbutmore and more women are interested in this sport. Another point is that active sport is healthy. On the one hand for some people it costs quite an effort, but on the other hand you will increase your stamina and you will feel better than before.
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clermp
Re: What role does sport play in your life?
Danke Keswick, wenn man dich nicht hätte 
It is absolutely essential to begin by saying that sport should be important for all people. Not only should the people watch sport on TV but also be active in sport. In every city you can find some kinds of sport. Whether it is swimming, running or going to a fitness studio. Moreover there are many several kinds of sport for persons for all ages.
Especially swimming is good for old and corpulent people because it is (gelenkschonend).
Wie könnte man gelenkschonend übersetzen?
Football and athletics are extremely popular in our country. When the World Championship or the Olympic Games come on TV, a lot of people to be glued to the television and (mitfiebern) our German athletes.
Was heißt hier mit fiebern?
It is absolutely essential to begin by saying that sport should be important for all people. Not only should the people watch sport on TV but also be active in sport. In every city you can find some kinds of sport. Whether it is swimming, running or going to a fitness studio. Moreover there are many several kinds of sport for persons for all ages.
Especially swimming is good for old and corpulent people because it is (gelenkschonend).
Wie könnte man gelenkschonend übersetzen?
Football and athletics are extremely popular in our country. When the World Championship or the Olympic Games come on TV, a lot of people to be glued to the television and (mitfiebern) our German athletes.
Was heißt hier mit fiebern?
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Keswick (Contributor)
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clermp
Re: What role does sport play in your life?
Direkt im Wörterbuch steht es nicht, aber dort würde es einer mit a low-impact sport übersetzen.
mit fiebern steht wirklich nicht drin.
mit fiebern steht wirklich nicht drin.
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Keswick (Contributor)
Re: What role does sport play in your life?
Fuer gelenkschonend gibt es 3 Eintraege, wobei low-impact ginge, ich wuerde es aber eher mit soft on the joints oder aehnlichem uebersetzen.
Und fuer mitfiebern gibt es 9 Eintraege, in denen stehen auch Uebersetzungen die passen wuerden.
Und fuer mitfiebern gibt es 9 Eintraege, in denen stehen auch Uebersetzungen die passen wuerden.
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clermp
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Ok hast recht, dass lag aber daran das mein Word 2007 mir das anders geschrieben hatte 
Hier der komplette Text
It is absolutely essential to begin by saying that sport should be important for all people. Not only should the people watch sport on TV but also be active in sport. In every city you can find some kinds of sport. Whether it is swimming, running or going to a fitness studio. Moreover there are many several kinds of sport for persons for all ages.
Especially swimming is good for old and corpulent people because it is soft on the joints.
Football and athletics are extremely popular in our country. When the World Championship or the Olympic Games come on TV, a lot of people to be glued to the television and crossing their fingers our German athletes. But although women football became interesting for the TV viewer in the last years. Although football is a typical male sport more and more women are interested in this sport.
Another point is that active sport is healthy. On the one hand for some people it costs quite an effort, but on the other hand you will increase your stamina and you will feel better than before. Consistently you heard in the news on TV that many athletes to take doping. It is prohibited and dangerous for the athlete’s health. With this drugs the people growing their efficiency. The main reason is that the athletes to be under considerable strain and they want to show the best effort.
Hier der komplette Text
It is absolutely essential to begin by saying that sport should be important for all people. Not only should the people watch sport on TV but also be active in sport. In every city you can find some kinds of sport. Whether it is swimming, running or going to a fitness studio. Moreover there are many several kinds of sport for persons for all ages.
Especially swimming is good for old and corpulent people because it is soft on the joints.
Football and athletics are extremely popular in our country. When the World Championship or the Olympic Games come on TV, a lot of people to be glued to the television and crossing their fingers our German athletes. But although women football became interesting for the TV viewer in the last years. Although football is a typical male sport more and more women are interested in this sport.
Another point is that active sport is healthy. On the one hand for some people it costs quite an effort, but on the other hand you will increase your stamina and you will feel better than before. Consistently you heard in the news on TV that many athletes to take doping. It is prohibited and dangerous for the athlete’s health. With this drugs the people growing their efficiency. The main reason is that the athletes to be under considerable strain and they want to show the best effort.
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Keswick (Contributor)
Re: What role does sport play in your life?
Na dann kannst du es ja nicht finden 
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1) Vielleicht eher "for everybody" ?
2) Nach nochmaligem Ueberlegen wuerde ich das "the" doch weglassen .
3) Eher "different"
4) Satzstellung veraendert
5) Kannst du weglassen
*) Mein Fehler! Ich hatte den Satz falsch gelesen! Nun stimmt er!
.Anmerkungen zum Ausdruck, die du nicht unbedingt uebernehmen musst!clermp hat geschrieben:It is absolutely essential to begin by saying that sport should be important for all people1). Not only shouldthe2) people watch sport on TV but also be active in sport. In every city you can find some kinds of sport. Whether it is swimming, running or going to a fitness studio. Moreover there are many several3) kinds of sport for persons for all ages.
Especially swimming is good for old and corpulent people because it is soft on the joints.
Football and athletics are extremely popular in our country. When the World Championship or the Olympic Games are on TV, a lot of people are glued to the television and cross their fingers for our German athletes. But women football became interesting for the TV viewer in the last years, as well*). Although football is a typical male sport, more and more women are interested in this sport.
Another point is that active sport is healthy. On the one hand it costs quite an effort for some people4), but on the other hand you will increase your stamina and you will feel better than before. Consistently you hear on the newson TV5) that many athletestotake doping. It is prohibited and dangerous for the athlete’s health. With these drugs the athletes want to enhance their efficiency. The main reason is that the athletes are under considerable strain and they want to show their best effort.
1) Vielleicht eher "for everybody" ?
2) Nach nochmaligem Ueberlegen wuerde ich das "the" doch weglassen
.3) Eher "different"
4) Satzstellung veraendert
5) Kannst du weglassen
*) Mein Fehler! Ich hatte den Satz falsch gelesen! Nun stimmt er!
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clermp
Re: What role does sport play in your life?
Danke, morgen schreibe ich dann noch meine persönliche Meinung, dann müsste ich die 250 geknackt haben.
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clermp
Re: What role does sport play in your life?
So, hier ist nun der letzte Teil.
My own view of the matter is that sport is significant yet. For many years ago I was in a athletics club with two friends. On the whole it has been so much fun to me, but my friends not continue with this sport and I had made the mistake that I had to ceased with this sport. Nevertheless sometimes today I playing badminton. It is a good balance to the school. On the other hand it costs me quite an effort to do it. I want to do so many things, but in the end I not make it.
All in all I can say that sport is important for the humans. That's good for the health and the people have a balance to their work. There are several kinds of sport, e.g. stamina sport, strength sport or even apparatus gymnastics. So, the people have a lot of possibilities to make sport.
My own view of the matter is that sport is significant yet. For many years ago I was in a athletics club with two friends. On the whole it has been so much fun to me, but my friends not continue with this sport and I had made the mistake that I had to ceased with this sport. Nevertheless sometimes today I playing badminton. It is a good balance to the school. On the other hand it costs me quite an effort to do it. I want to do so many things, but in the end I not make it.
All in all I can say that sport is important for the humans. That's good for the health and the people have a balance to their work. There are several kinds of sport, e.g. stamina sport, strength sport or even apparatus gymnastics. So, the people have a lot of possibilities to make sport.
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Keswick (Contributor)
Re: What role does sport play in your life?
clermp hat geschrieben:So, hier ist nun der letzte Teil.
My own view on the matter is that sport is significantyet. Many years ago me and two friends of mine were members of an athletics club. On the whole I enjoyed it, but my friends did not continue with this sport and Ihadmade the mistake that I had to ceased with this sport. (Das verstehe ich nicht!)Nevertheless today I sometimes play badminton. It is a good counterbalance totheschool. On the other hand it costs me quite an effort to do it. I want to do so many things, but in the end I not make it. (Du schaffst es nicht?)
All in all I can say that sport is important for people. It is good for the health and the people have a counterbalance to their work. There are several kinds of sport, e.g. stamina sport, strength sport or even apparatus gymnastics. So, the people have a lot of possibilities to do sport.